Reviews for The Olympian Chronicles: Learn to Fly
Jaylene Olebar chapter 1 . 5/19
haha lol that was awesome
babygirlslytherin chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
i love this story i read it over and over it is very good
Daughter-of-the-Big-Three1301 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
I love it! Very hot and sexy. luved very minute of it. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
The first part was erotic if rushed the last was off key comical and rushed.
One suggestion: Don't have hera leave zeus; have zeus make percy a god as he did with ganymede.
Monkey dragon chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
I would say that i'm sorry that your dada died, but 1. It wasn't my fault and 2. I know that sometimes just doesn't cover it. (my mom died when i was 3)
Childish Whimsy chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Lol, I couldnt find a nosebleed icon... Oh well.
Realynnie chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
Good idea, good plot, descriptive, good writing style; YOU ARE AMAZING. Keep it up!
Mari Vargas chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
I like this story, but I have one suggestion: maybe add a little more detail? I wrote a short story for my English class one time and I hadn't noticed until I was reading it in front of my entire class that I had written a 3 page outline for a much longer story. I'm kind of getting the same feeling when reading this story. I really like your ideas though :D
Lavonya chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh... SEXY... *drools*
anon chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Awesome
Bumblebee transformer lover chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I love it
Lourdes08 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
it was great!
D3ATHR0SE chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Hella good story :)
psychobitchlovely chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
im so sorry about your dad.
but great story anyway.
good job.
emthereble chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
love it!
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