|Reviews for What Took You So Long?|
| Hiwatari-Winchester addict chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Awwww! that was so cute! and so nicely written! Loved it! Keep up the good work _
| AquilaTempestas chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Johnny and Kai? Man, I used to worship this pairing!
Glad to see people still write it.
Lol Johnny worked at a bookstore with Mariah?
Loved this line: 'Was going to ask you out when your shift ended,' Kai panted back, jerking in his hand. 'Thought I'd score.' Ha ha ha, could see Kai saying that.
Loved it! Nice short sex scene too : ) Haven't read one of these in years.
I hear you take requests? If so... is it possible for a MystelxJohnny?
| PandaPjays chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Mmm Johnny... Sorry, what? What were we talking about?
What a delicious fic to wake up to m'dear. Normally I'm not a fan of KaiJohnny simply because I picture them ripping each others heads off while they're busy ripping each others clothing off. Not exactly long-term relationship material, methinks. But this was just enjoyable.
I love the thought of Johnny grumbling about the number of cocktails he memorised only to be relegated to beer-pouring duties. Though beer's got about a million and six different varieties. And they all taste like warmed up cat pee even when it's cold. But I digress.
I also enjoyed the brief interview-like inserts. They broke up the story nicely.
Also - Nice to see you're dabbling in past tense again. I do so enjoy your present tense fics but past leads to a different feel and a nice refreshing change.
...I just realised that I was celebrating the differences between tenses. Sorry, I'll just take my English-nerd self over into this corner, yes?
I do have a challenge for you, though. ReiBalcov. Because at the moment I can't get enough of them. Minus lemon, though. Because though sexytime is awesome I don't think anyone (apart from me, obviously) wants Rei and sexyrexyoldmanlovin'
Of course, if you accept this challenge you will receive my eternal love, devotion and respect and also a fic in return if you so wish.
| Yoko Fujioka chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Oh my god, you are freaking AMAZING! *glomps you*
The actual sex seemed a little short, but I loved the little "interviews" here and there, they were really funny and oddly kind of cool. i kinda wanna try it sometime now... *gets a thinking look on her face*
Thanks so much for doing this for me! XD