|Reviews for Deathgroup Season 1: The Beginning|
| MissBrains101 chapter 4 . 3/24/2014
Uh, dude, this is like a crossover of Kingdom Hearts and Sonic X. You should put that the summary and genre description! It's a cool story though.
| Sonic Speed Blue Blur 23 chapter 4 . 2/20/2011
If you're having problems thickening up the plot, use a better spoon. I don't care if it doesn't make sense, it's my first quote I made up myself! XD
But seriously, it's a nice story! Keep it up! :)
| edvis93 chapter 4 . 2/20/2011
Interesting story. Update soon.
| Chaos Kai Mercenary chapter 4 . 2/19/2011
Alright after 4 Chapters you are pretty good. However you need to provide more detail into your work...But then again Tails is one of the more ...powerful life forms in my Case. For example(Don't steal my idea! or i'll personally beat you up) Tails also had an internal Demon in him which once unleashed no one could stop it except my Oc and Cosmo. Sonic even in his super form nearly got killed...Anyways what I'm trying to say is Good work and may more people review your stories