Ran across this story and this is where you stop?
I'll have a look at what you wrote instead. You obviously have ideas and can write. Why not this story? Such a good plot, so many options...
Here's hoping you other stuff is just as good. Does not need to be any better.

More please

While this is certainly well written, I have no clue what the fuck is happening

Whoever’s demanding updates like you’re entitled to them In the reviews
He will update when he likes he has literally no obligation to finish this story
Be thankful that he did this at all
Now stop begging for scraps like the dog you are

Very interesting start! Nicely written too. I'd really like to see where you intended to take this story if you are ever in the mood to publish a quick summary of the plot.

Imagine being so brain dead you abandon a story like this. Life must be hard for someone as stupid as you.

Interesting story so far. Characterisations are pretty believable given different worlds, and action scenes are well written. Just too many unanswered questions! I hope you find inspiration and update soon.

This is a "h0lds up sp0rk" fanfiction if I've ever seen one.

Imagine being too stupid to finish this story. I can't imagine how hard life must be for you.

get ur sorry arse down here and finish this your fans have been waiting too long

it's been over a year, please update? Would love to see what'd happen next

A strange and interesting read, Thanks for Writing!

Well, this was very interesting.

Liked the world building bits, really out of the fanfiction level writing talent there. The rest is interesting but so far it gone nowhere.

I do so hope you come back and finish this story sometime.