I love this
More!

is this abandoned? cuz it is gr8!

I really wish this had been continued. I admit, I started off wary as I don't generally truly enjoy the Crazy!Harry fics all too much. However this has an interesting mix and Harry quickly went from 'crazy' to 'eccentric' which is borderline, but when done well, quite fun. This was done well!

Seeing a VERY different take on Petunia - one that stays true to her canon character no less - was intriguing. As was a Tom Riddle that genuinely seems to have chosen to support the other side and play politics as a Smart!Tom should/would. Voldemort may be powerful but the man was an complexity addicted idiot in the extreme. This Riddle seems to be actually intelligent though still power hungry. A bad person who has managed to play the part of a warm, personable good guy for long enough that others can believe it. He's basically a textbook high-functioning sociopath and it works well.

This take on Tonks is also quite possibly the only story that I've seen go this route. It's fun and far from the norm which is refreshing in a fandom rife with well-used cliches. I'm very intrigued to see where you were planning to take this. I understand it's probably never going to be updated again since it's been years, but if you had any notes or something that would be awesome to see what the initial general outline was.

Cheers and well done on keeping a rote base fresh!

Completely blown away! I so wish you would continue this.

Holy hell, this is great! Write moar!

We want moar

Hopefully, you'll eventually pick this fic up again since you're still active on DLP

I really, really, seriously hope that this fic continues... I'm loving every bit of this so far. please keep it up!

Yeaaaaaah, fucking awesome!

Such a shame, that such amazing story is abandoned. You built up a fascinating world.

realy interesting can't wait to see where this goes

Another thing: You wrote "ten years old than you" which should be "ten years older than you."

Small thing. You wrote "if her were not mistaken," which should be "if he was not mistaken." Otherwise, good chapter.

I'm extremely confused.

Literacy is good, wordsmithing is fine, just with it abandoned and now half read entire work so far, and it's disjointed, jarring, leaping around, like chopped up pieces of a story. Maybe the gaps would fill in in next few chapters, but if not, I'll have spent time in slices of this potpourri slice and dice-erama, but with it abandoned, I've no patience to continue with no solid plot or really finding one in sight.