Reviews for Losing It
kstar0330 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Ugh not Jms! ;]
barbiedoll123 chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Love it
Taylor9901 chapter 20 . 10/7/2012
This story was awesome. You are a great author.
TwilightChangedMyLife chapter 20 . 10/1/2012
I am sorry. I loved this story but I think the last two chapters ended up in the pants, and not in a good way. Bella losing her virginity was realistic but after that it took a nose dive. There were many informational gaps, like Rosalie actually being the one who Emmet had a crush on. How did he maintain that crush/relationship while she was away at UCLA? When did Renee leave Charlie? Or didn't she? Did Bella actualy enjoy sex after the first time? Details? That would have been epic! But the most dissappointing was Bella giving birth nine months after the wedding. How cliché! I don't know what you were going through in your life at the end of this story, but I know you are capable of so much better. Hello Beautiful is my fave of your stories. 3
Iklepixie chapter 20 . 9/17/2012
Found on twifanfictionrecs. Really enjoyed this. Love that it was a whole story and a quick read from start to finish. Edward was nervous enough but not too geeky. Alice was a suprise.
maphie chapter 20 . 9/13/2012
There was a book hidden behind the last chapter. Whew! Good read!
Guest chapter 20 . 9/9/2012
Awww loved it ;)
Just Me Alone chapter 20 . 9/9/2012
Just Me Alone chapter 19 . 9/9/2012
Love this and Bella is right Renee is an idiot...
Just Me Alone chapter 18 . 9/9/2012
Shocked about charlie...poor Bella.
Just Me Alone chapter 17 . 9/9/2012
That is horrible that her mother is like that...
Just Me Alone chapter 16 . 9/9/2012
I loved that he stood up for her and that she finally realized how horrible James is...
Just Me Alone chapter 15 . 9/9/2012
Thank God...he can do this. Okay gotta go her from a slumber party, finish later.
Just Me Alone chapter 14 . 9/9/2012
Well, I say if she does it then she has lost Edward forever...
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