Reviews for Fantastic Force
Azrielle.Antoinette chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
lol, rape scene, funny. The catcher rather than reciever part funny as well.

Nice job with it but the PeterZach thing confuusing and the Nathan and Karen thing as well... confusing.
Azrielle.Antoinette chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
alright, So, I like the story but I was a little confused when it started jumping between Alice and Susan, that kind of threw me off there. Need to work on your sentences, a few of them are run-ons and can hurt your writing at times.
Lady of Realities chapter 2 . 2/13/2011
Aside from the need for more spacing, so far so good. Please continue.