Reviews for When I'm With You
Unicorns.to.the.max chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
I really loved your story and your previous story 'Tickle Fight' too 33

I adore your writing and how the characters in your story weren't OOC. And you described the situation so well, I could really picture it (:

I know I'm reviewing quite late, but could you maybe make such a story with Gilbert? And maybe with Oz tickling him, or such a thing (I'm no shounen ai fan, you know just such a friendship-thingy ;D)

And if you do so, could you by any chance write me a message, so I can read it?

It would be so great if you could manage that 33

[and please excuse my bad englisch, i'm from germany ;P)
kukayalover chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Awwwwww cuuuuuteeeee!

The tickle fight was hilarious! XD I love your writing!
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
This was so cute!
Wyrdfayth chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
X3 I really do feel horrible, but somehow in reading the absolutely delightful and amusing beginning of this, all I could concentrate on was "... lol Break's 'eyes' and 'irises' lololol". xP Break only has one eye, silly

More to the point though, this is very cute. The very end with her reasons for thanking him feel a little sudden, but it's not too bad. The innocent innuendo is pretty epic, if slightly spoiled by your mentioning another Tickle Fight in your opening author's note. XP Thanks to that I sort of saw it coming, but I don't imagine everyone does, and if you left out the particular title in mention of the other fic or moved that comment to the end you'd probably catch everyone off-guard every time. X3 Again, very cute. I enjoyed it a lot. :3
xSakuraRosesx chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Awww! How adorable! :D
Guby-san chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Very nice ! Loved it !

By the way I like how you incorporated things that Xerxes would most likely do.

Keep it up ;)
irish d' salmon luver chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
At the part when Break held Sharon down to her bed, holding her wrists, I have to check the rating once again to make sure it isn't rated M :D

funny and heartwarming, those are the best words to describe this story ;)
Geellaa-Green chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
this fic was so cuteeee!
Joezette chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Nice and fluffy story, it's suits them xD

Nice story. Keep writing
pinkhearter13 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Aw, this was very cute! I especially love the ending-on how he is the only one she can be herself around. And you really did a good job describing the tickling attack! I literally could picture and hear it in my mind. Awesome!

Write more soon!

pinkhearter13
TraumaQueenAmy chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
OMG! Thank you so much for writing/typing this! *hugs* I love it to bits! It's a perfect BreakXSharon fluff. I added to my favorites as soon as I read it. I love the whole playful tickle thing plus how Break calms her down with light caresses. That was so sweet and lovely, and yes, you should definitely make more fanfics including Break. I've only made a couple of fanfic requests before and this is the first fanfic response. THANK YOU! X3 Keep up the good work. This fanfic just made my day! _