|Reviews for The Shadows of The Past|
| Guest chapter 29 . 8/22/2013
WHY MUST YOU KEEP KILLING LUCAS?!
| Lucas chapter 30 . 3/25/2013
Hey um could you STOP KILLING ME! I ALREADY DIED 3 TIMES! (What if..., Damaged Heart and this fic.
| miscat chapter 30 . 1/20/2013
"Jeff, im giving you Lucas's body maps. You must protect this vital information!"
Well, that backfired.
| TechnoFool chapter 29 . 1/20/2013
OH MY GOD! A bunch of emotions piling up in my chest, don't do that-DON'T TOY WITH MY EMOTIONS! Lucas and Fuel died! They died!? I'm so speechless-I'm crying-I'm-
LUCAS...! No no nooo... I mean I know that everything comes to an end, but... He died and they and he and AND...
OK-that's good writing a few spelling errors and grammar, um-really sad...so yeah...
I'm having trouble accepting this, okay...?! Dx
| miscat chapter 29 . 1/19/2013
No crying until the end...
| TechnoFool chapter 27 . 1/13/2013
Very suspenseful. A little confusing, but that's only cuz I myself can't understand the full concept. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next!
Fuel is Gigicise!? Woah... That's... Deep... Kinda a bit aggravating for me since I like Fuel as his own person rather than him being Gigicise... But they're the same person. Shocking too. Just as shocking and sad as Lucas being Gigue/Giygas...
I hope you make the next chapter soon! I can't wait! Please update soon. I really love it so far! But Lucas getting stabbed and then being as calm as ever when he greets his friends? The heck?
A few typos and misused words, mainly the words then and than again. Although, that's a very common mistake I've seen you do.
I would prefer that sometimes in a few previous chapters that in the dialogue you state which character says it like when they are in an argument, for example.
Haha, you tricked me, thinking Fuel was gonna stab Ninten and Ness. Pfft.
Very funny jokes too lol I was cracking up so much.
Good luck for your next chapter, you have my support as always!
| TechnoFool chapter 4 . 1/8/2013
You used "then" instead of "than." Than is a word used to compare, in your case, means you shoud use "than" in your previous sentences.
| CarnileN chapter 25 . 1/5/2013
This is just getting better. I wonder how the Death of the Undying will really be.
| CarnileN chapter 23 . 10/15/2012
I never imagined Lucas could play a prank to someone. And the one to Claus was quite funny
| Chiny369 Nemo chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
wow POOR lucas XD
| Akabari chapter 21 . 9/2/2012
WOOH! Sorry I didn't see ya update, I was busy doing something And I know I have no rights to said this but, WHY YOU UPDATE SO LATEEE? I was waiting for like, uhhh I lost counts. .WAY.. I'm truly curious to see what's going to happen next! Soooooooo bye!
| Chiny369 chapter 20 . 8/18/2012
or sky kidnapped Fuel
want and see what happens
| Akabari chapter 20 . 8/17/2012
I never get tired of reading these..It's just simply cool..AND THE BEST EARTHBOUND FANFIC EVA! I'm looking forward for your next chapter.
| Akabari chapter 19 . 8/15/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY. Please, again, PLEASE continue. I LOVE DARK LUCAS!
| Vall chapter 19 . 8/5/2012
Hmm, thing haven't heat up from here. tee-hee-hee! I'll be watching you for next chapter...