Reviews for EO Challenge: Avalanche
Nana56 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Whew! Avalanche! Scary stuff. It would be awful to be in one. When I see one in a movie or TV show, it takes my breath away. It would be soo much worse to be with someone and find yourself alone at the bottom!

Great tension here. :)
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Oh WOW - I LOVE it! Incredible, gripping, vivid. Like an avalanche :-) You build a whole picture in these short words, story, mood, emotions, action - only with "brothers apart" and "no Dean" and "a boot, a leg, a brother". Awesome, Dizz. I had to snicker about the delights of apres-ski without the skis, because that's exactly the way I like it ;-)

Kudos, honey!

xxx Kate
Madd Aless chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Loving the imagery and desperation of Sam, plus a 'good' Sam day.
Swellison chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Wow, another good one, Dizzo. You're on a roll tonight;-) I likr Sam's staccato thinking in this!

Sue
Wolfpack pride chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
"No match for separated Winchesters" I love that line. This is a very action packed 100 words with a lot of love thrown in too. Thank you for yet another great birthday gift.
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Erf - I was worried for our boy here! Beautiful descriptions here, I felt my eyes ache with the snow-blindness. Really vivid imagery, lovely work!

LD
Colby's girl chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Loved it. Now this is a drabble I would love to see extented into a full story. Hmmmm...
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Too right, nothing, not even an avalanche can keep our boys apart for long. Great imagery (loved the dogginess of their wet noses!) and the description of the avalanche itself is awesome!
Zinfer chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Way cool
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Nice. A rather unique, abstract drabble.