|Reviews for On the outside looking in|
| safewithklaroline chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
I love you, it's official. I have been searching all afternoon for some good fanfictions and thought I'd check up to see if you'd written any because I hadn't visited your profile in forever. I find not only 1, but 2 gorgeously written pieces. You're the best and I'll be hanging out for the multiple-chapter fic you mentioned.
Lots of love Brynndabella
| Corallie chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Great one-piece. :) Their interactions felt very natural and I could totally see them behaving that way. And the last part was so unexpected but it made the whole thing even better.
| wellversedinconverse chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
OH MY GOSH! I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH OMG! You are incredible did you know? LOL Seriously this is what I want soooo much from the show. I can't. even. *dies*
Bravo! Keep up the great work! I love reading your stories hon!
| Christy19 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Great story! :)
| XxBaby.BooxX chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
this story made my day! i loved it. And look forward to reading more of your work :)
| Lizzy85cec chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Loved it loved it loved it... You should update ;)
| tvjunkie159 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
WOAH! this was so good! you perfectly captured the elena/damon banter, i was smiling the whole time. and i LOVE the last lines, he would always be the one outside looking in. so good! please make a multi-chapter one of them. i love the pairing and you portray them so well!
| LittleFanGirl chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Wow. I thoroughly enjoyed that. It was written really well and I thought you kept them in character amazingly. I loved the flirting between them, I can totally picture this scene. Thankyou for writing this, loved it XD
| FireFairy219 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
That would be perfect for the show to use :D It was a nice read, very credible. The end was a little unexpected and at first seemed somewhat out of place, but now I can definitely appreciate it. It's just so true.
And could you check out my TVD story as well, pretty please with a cherry on top? I'm new at writing for this show and I'd love some feedback from someone who's been writing a lot more fanfics for it :) (It's a character study on Damon, in case you were wondering)
| navimalo chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Cutest fic ! Thank you for them !
A little tenderness in this savage world !
| Rosesareforever chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I loved it! ;)
| EtherealDemon chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Wonderful one shot. I loved the banter and the flirting, it reminded me of how they used to act around each other before everything became so serious.
I actually love John to pieces especially that he's so infuriatingly right about everything all the time. I love it.
| Lethalvampire chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I want to know what happens next. I cant wait for this to be a multi-chapter.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Loved the fluff. Always needed
| ThreeJays chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I liked this. True that it's a bit fluffy, but I liked the banter, and I thought it was a great idea to have Elena back him off. I'm a bit of a sucker for Damon in the kitchen, and the culmination in the high five was just perfect.