Reviews for WAYFARER
Mouse95 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Oh poor poor boys
TheKritty chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Oh I love this. I love that you don't know what exactly happened, but there is an abstract plot somewhere in there and we see the result - if that makes any sense.I love the...well, it's almost the POV of the snowflake,lol. I love everything about this little piece of art!

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Nana56 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Awwww. Very nice. I'd like to see some more about what happened here. Please? :D

Nicely done. :)
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Love the journey of the snowflake, very nice perspective...
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I love what you did hear, the contrasting of the peaceful and the painful images, the blending of dark and light, great work!
badaiwind chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Image of the rescue?
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Wow, this is simply wonderful! Loved the idea to have a snowflakes POV, and you created a very vivid image of how much fun that can be - and if I were a snowflake I would love to end on these lashes! And then the camera draws back, revealing the whole picture, two men lying in the snow, bleeding - incredible intense! Beautiful drabble, Vanessa :-)

xxx Kate
YouCompleteMe1990 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Why are all of the stories Hurt/Comfort? Its depressing. You might wanna do something about that. Make it happier.
Madd Aless chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Ouch that hurts, the imagery was great. I love the snowflake point of view
Swellison chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Unique, one-in-a-million snowflake perspective. Cool!

Sue
LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Oh no! *chews nails* You won't leave them like that will you? *calls the St. Bernard*

Wow, gorgeous, descriptive imagery here, I could see it so clearly in my mind's eye. Beautiful stuff!

LD
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
The snowflakes sounded so peaceful in comparison to the wounds and rents they landed on. Very effective writing.
Dizzo chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
just ... uh, yum!

Gorgeous images, thank you!

xx