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Hujikari chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
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Massydov chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Hey, I liked it! Nice job! You should add some more detail to the next one. Make it a bit longer. :)
amisunderstoodlifesandy chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
This story is awesome but I don't really know if you should just end it there. It has great potential in my opinion :)
BlackPancake chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
Beautiful. Will there be more chapters? 3
Emerald Ryuu Feather chapter 2 . 8/30/2011
Ohhhh k...o.o
MasterSui chapter 2 . 6/18/2011
more? pwease?
Belgii-chan chapter 2 . 5/20/2011
aww this thing's cute and you end it D: ..i love it 3
ivorywinterdemon chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
what no butt sex? lol anyway it was pretty good
Emerald Ryuu Feather chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
the cat and the canary.
WillowSioui chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Very good, but I have three small problems with it:

1) Florence, at the time, was very good to homosexual people. That is why Leonardo came back there after his apprenticeship.

2) Your sentence 'The young kissed the other again' doesn't make sense.

3) 'Ezio stroked mindlessly stroked' also doesn't make sense.

Other than that, very good!

~R
chancake chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Ooohh~ well that was a fun read :D

good job!

Cake x
angelwithabutt chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Awww. So cute. I really like your story, and the characters sound alot like they are in the game. Can you write another chapter please? It really deserves it.
Won Tawn chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Oh, Twiny. :'D