|Reviews for Promises|
| dmichelle312 chapter 2 . 1/7
A marvellous piece of writing...
| Ariel D chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
As you well know, I love this story. I adore the hurt/comfort aspect, the way they are clearly friends and clearly care for each other. However, I also think the fight scene and the slowed down time is totally awesome. I got H/C and wicked-cool fighting all in the same story. You can't beat that.
You know, I agree with one of the other reviewers-you can't get enough Entreri and Jarlaxle hurt/comfort stories!
| Yulandia chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
I rather like fluff, thank you :)
Aww poor Artemis. That was rather tense when he was forced to make a false promise like that, especially when he was so worried about his best friend dying. And he didn't want to betray his friend by having it not be true.
I love the fighting coordination of these two - the hand signaling and OH! Jarlaxle's new ring. Very cool! That fight scene was amazing - brief, gory and fun to watch! Neat that it was observed from a standpoint of wonder and amusement. Definitely shared the reader's reaction!
And then the heartfelt conversation surrounded by bleeding chunks of dead men. *big smiles* (only these two...)
I'm sure that Jarlaxle's near death in the last chapter made Artemis feel somewhat betrayed. His choice of of a promise from Jarlaxle in the second chapter just proves it.
Nicely done :)))
| Lady Annikaa chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
| Silverfox1 chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
Ah, it's been a long time since I enjoyed an FR fic this much. I just love those two. (And I like hurt-comfort, too. Perfect combination.)
| jarltreri chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
amazingly cute. your writing just keeps getting better!
| Groupon chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
What is in this story that makes it so awesome?
Artemis and Jarlaxle? check, blood? check, guts? check, fluff? double check.
Thus my instant crazy love for this story.
| Blaky-chan chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
Another awesome story from you, i love it. Mainly because its Artemis and Jarlaxle fluff and God knows the world needs more Artemis and Jarlaxle fluff _~
I also like your characterization of them they dont seem to be to OOC and their banter is definitively In-character and real.
So? Continue please!
| Gimme-a-Hand-Scaevola chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
Wow this was...adorable. In a very Artemis Entreri sort of way. I'm very impressed how you made a Artemis so open about his friendship and still not massively OOC. But really, it was very cute. I enjoyed it very much.
| general zargon chapter 2 . 2/13/2011
Hehe, I have to say, you write Artemis/Jarlaxle banter really well, and I love this story. _ I liked how you wrote Artemis's speech, and Jarlaxle's reference to Artemis making a good paladin made me laugh. :D Please keep up the excellent work!