Guest chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Noooooooo ! Why did Maka have to dieeeeee ? It's so saaaad! But other than that , it's a nice plot line and pretty okay . But seriously , why did u have to make Maka dieeeeeeee ? *Goes to my corner and weeps *
Lord of Mudkips chapter 3 . 8/9/2013
I thought it was beautiful. It had the right amount of sadness as it did entertainment and you stayed true to everyone's character even Ragnarok. So all in all I give it a 4.35 with the title of amazing.
P.S. Dude you should become a real author it would suit you bro.
firerose132 chapter 3 . 4/8/2012
LesPaul12 chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
how did Kid know to yell at Soul in chapter 1?
Mmeeee chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
At first I was like wth? Soul and maka pregnant? Cuz I love the strong friendship they have but I kept reading because the writing was good and by the end I was in tears. It was so sweet and sad. It's undescribable. Really great job at getting the reader to feel. C:
Alik Takeda chapter 3 . 5/28/2011
Oh shit! I'm crying!
Rocket2SE chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
My friend, you have just made me cry... Love your work!
Edge of My Life chapter 3 . 2/16/2011
You, my friend... Have just made me cry. And it's 1am... This is the SECOND and the ONLY other story that has made me cry... EVER... That's an achievement... Props to you dude... You ACTUALLY made me cry... Trust me, if you knew me... You'd know that I NEVER cry, only at terrible things...

Well done! Impressed! Your writing skills are friggen awesome! XD xo
Ataku Hikaru chapter 3 . 2/16/2011
I. Cried. I NEVER CRY! Dammit...
GlowingLikeASolarFire chapter 3 . 2/16/2011
I started crying when this ended, but I couldn't imagine it ending any other way. Love it. It was very well-written, and I loved the idea . . . one thing confused me though, Akemi was Soul's baby, right? It wasn't to clear about that, and since Kid told Soul that something might happen, but they aren't sure yet, it kinda seemed like he was the dad. . . . Love this

~From the desk of Insanity
TheManInTheHat chapter 3 . 2/15/2011
The end was so sad I actually felt physically ill.

Takes some damn good words to do that. Hats off to you for a great fic.
Soma chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
Awwww that was soo cute...except for blackstar being on a rampage he was kinda mean! Update soon please!
SymmetryKatt1115 chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
Really creative! I love it! but do you have a sequel, cause i cant get enough of it, how sweet!
0025 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Hmmmm... Interesting! I haven't seen a fanfic like this before! Definately keep going! I'm curious...
Ataku Hikaru chapter 2 . 2/14/2011
Make soul become a kishen me love you long time
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