|Reviews for Conversations Over Coffee|
| Yinzer Reader chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Went looking for more of your writing and started this one. Such a lovely story start. You are a beautiful writer. I love when dialogue is wrapped by description. Thank you
| asiula chapter 6 . 12/14/2011
One word - beautiful. I really LOVED it! :)
| Erroneous78 chapter 6 . 12/11/2011
How amazing is this fic?
So perfect. Running & kissing in the rain. 6 chapters was so not enough - I would love to read more - but oh my. So pretty.
Pretty words, pretty characters, pretty author.
Truely sweet & lovely & I loved it :)
Thank you xxx
| Erroneous78 chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
Yay! Yay! Yay! No hospital! No accident. He did want to see her and he watches her (no WAY EVER in a creepy way) before he goes to see her.
So many lines of this story I want to re quote but im pretty sure the whole chapter would be included then!
Beautiful writing, I dont want to stop reading.
Marvar must be a very special girly to have such a lovely, wonderful friend as you to write such a beautiful story for. Lucky, lucky girl x
| Erroneous78 chapter 4 . 12/11/2011
Where is he? *frowny, scrunchy face*
Something awful must've happened. Oh no! What if it did? What if he's in the hospital? *deep breaths now*
There's gotta be a reason right? Yeah, there is...
Awww Bella holding her own hands in her lap :(
| Erroneous78 chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness! I cant. I just cannot!
My face aches. Can you get repetative strain from smiling too much?
He wants to be her friend. He thinks shes beautiful. And he touched her elbow!
Theres *so* not enough elbow touching in ffn ;)
*Le sigh* Sooooooo pretty :)
| Erroneous78 chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
Squeee! I need to! Im giggling and blushing alongside these two. Its almost like im at the next table and im eavesdropping on their conversation ;)
I really ought to stop listening but I cant!
So many things to love, especially this bit
"We could play a different game," he suggests.
"Like doctor?" I ask…because I'm an idiot.
He's never coming back.
"Umm…well…" His cheeks are pink – red. They're definitely red. "Do you play that a lot?"
And I figure I need to go with it at this point.
Love them ;) xx
| Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I saw this being tweeted about and thought id take a peek.
These two are gorgeous. Simple chat but with a hint of something more - possibility I think.
So - tomorrow - bring it :)
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
Omg this was the sweetest story I've ever read. I hate that there's no next button. I want to be a stalker and follow them always, but in a non creepy way. I loved this so much. XOXO
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
My cheeks hurt from smiling. I love them both.
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
Edward, where were you? Perhaps he was saving a kitten from a tree, and that briefcase from before was a prop, and he's really a fireman. That's my excuse for him anyway. LOL
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
I think that was my favourite elbow touch in a fic to date. I was all, "never stop touching her elbow", which sounds so weird now that I'm typing this. LMAO
Also, I want Edward to friend request me.
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
This is making my heart all warm and fuzzy. And I laughed so loud at this part:
'"We could play a different game," he suggests.
"Like doctor?" I ask…because I'm an idiot.' LMAO
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
And now I'm smiling, too. And, "You think about my hair?" Me and Bella have this in common. LOL
Also, what is that flippy thing on the sugar container called? ;]
| blb1000 chapter 6 . 12/9/2011
Cute and sweet! Would that be Cweet or Scute? Either way, I enjoyed it. :)