|Reviews for Conversations Over Coffee|
| Yinzer Reader chapter 4 . 12/15/2011
Hope all is well with Edward. Thank you for your words.
| Yinzer Reader chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
Fun and witty duo. Thank you.
| Yinzer Reader chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Went looking for more of your writing and started this one. Such a lovely story start. You are a beautiful writer. I love when dialogue is wrapped by description. Thank you
| asiula chapter 6 . 12/14/2011
One word - beautiful. I really LOVED it! :)
| Erroneous78 chapter 6 . 12/11/2011
How amazing is this fic?
So perfect. Running & kissing in the rain. 6 chapters was so not enough - I would love to read more - but oh my. So pretty.
Pretty words, pretty characters, pretty author.
Truely sweet & lovely & I loved it :)
Thank you xxx
| Erroneous78 chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
Yay! Yay! Yay! No hospital! No accident. He did want to see her and he watches her (no WAY EVER in a creepy way) before he goes to see her.
So many lines of this story I want to re quote but im pretty sure the whole chapter would be included then!
Beautiful writing, I dont want to stop reading.
Marvar must be a very special girly to have such a lovely, wonderful friend as you to write such a beautiful story for. Lucky, lucky girl x
| Erroneous78 chapter 4 . 12/11/2011
Where is he? *frowny, scrunchy face*
Something awful must've happened. Oh no! What if it did? What if he's in the hospital? *deep breaths now*
There's gotta be a reason right? Yeah, there is...
Awww Bella holding her own hands in her lap :(
| Erroneous78 chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness! I cant. I just cannot!
My face aches. Can you get repetative strain from smiling too much?
He wants to be her friend. He thinks shes beautiful. And he touched her elbow!
Theres *so* not enough elbow touching in ffn ;)
*Le sigh* Sooooooo pretty :)
| Erroneous78 chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
Squeee! I need to! Im giggling and blushing alongside these two. Its almost like im at the next table and im eavesdropping on their conversation ;)
I really ought to stop listening but I cant!
So many things to love, especially this bit
"We could play a different game," he suggests.
"Like doctor?" I ask…because I'm an idiot.
He's never coming back.
"Umm…well…" His cheeks are pink – red. They're definitely red. "Do you play that a lot?"
And I figure I need to go with it at this point.
Love them ;) xx
| Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I saw this being tweeted about and thought id take a peek.
These two are gorgeous. Simple chat but with a hint of something more - possibility I think.
So - tomorrow - bring it :)
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 6 . 12/10/2011
Omg this was the sweetest story I've ever read. I hate that there's no next button. I want to be a stalker and follow them always, but in a non creepy way. I loved this so much. XOXO
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 5 . 12/10/2011
My cheeks hurt from smiling. I love them both.
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
Edward, where were you? Perhaps he was saving a kitten from a tree, and that briefcase from before was a prop, and he's really a fireman. That's my excuse for him anyway. LOL
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
I think that was my favourite elbow touch in a fic to date. I was all, "never stop touching her elbow", which sounds so weird now that I'm typing this. LMAO
Also, I want Edward to friend request me.
| VampiresHaveLaws chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
This is making my heart all warm and fuzzy. And I laughed so loud at this part:
'"We could play a different game," he suggests.
"Like doctor?" I ask…because I'm an idiot.' LMAO