|Reviews for Unexpected Development|
| Psycho Tangerine chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
Nicely done. They aren't that far apart in age (I think less than ten years). I can see those two together because Jan has a childlike outlook on the world.
| Crystal Blue Montana chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Well, this was quite cute; Jan experiencing romantic love for the first time, and the same for Natsume. Super waki waki indeed!
Looks like Gunpei has finally made some headway with a Yellow ranger! Good for him!
Hiroto is cute... I get the feeling that he's still a bit hesitant about his sister being with Sousuke, but has decided not to rock the boat too much. I wonder how he feels about that ring of hers?
Very cute and sweet!
| Hallwings chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Well, it guess it's okay.
I'll admit, this is a different couple, but it could possibly work (although it's not going to change my view on who I pair Jan with).
Now for the other couplings...
Was there anything really between Ran and Gunpei in the team-up? I'll admit, I haven't exactly seen the full team-up (just clips), but it looks a little weird to me.
And I think that Sousuke & Miu and Gou & Miki would have probably gotten married by this time, but that's just me.
Oh, and how exactly did Retsu react to finding out that Natsume was his niece?
| MysticFireBlood chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Nice fic, baby. I loved it and you _