Reviews for Whatever Works
Lillywhite1 chapter 44 . 7/14
Thanks for writing this wonderfull story!
Luereetwilitejunki chapter 42 . 7/7
Thank goodness All the girls are finally together!
tvd1992 chapter 15 . 12/15/2015
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Guest chapter 44 . 12/2/2015
Lovely story, thank you for sharing.
Kopec82 chapter 44 . 12/1/2015
Now I want to read shadowplay!
Fuchsina chapter 44 . 8/31/2015
I like this story.

Edward is, understandably very closed off at first and seems to be rather moody. But when he opens up and shows his real character he is just great.

I do not seem to much like your AH Bellas - with the exception of Rain on Me - this one makes assumptions left and right at the beginning without having half the facts, is always right, never seems to learn from her mistakes and does not let the other person explain what is really going on. But she does mature to the end, which I like very much.

I do not like your lemons - again. While there is minute detail in other situations, they are rushed and - for me - without much passion or love. A shame really.

But all in all a great storyline and a good read, than you!
Old Soul in Wonderland chapter 31 . 8/19/2015
This chapter was just so sweet. All of the Evan, Edward and Bella parts just melted my freaking heart. I seriously hope we see more of those because they are adorable.
This chapter has given some more insight into Maggie and Alice and it has made me like them even less (if that was possible). I don't understand how everyone can think Maggie is this saint and Edward is the villain. It was obvious That they were having a fling and even if Edward said he would call her, and then never did, she could've always called him and said, "hey so are we not actually together"? But she didn't and instead acted like the wounded party and hid Edwards son from him. The only time it is EVER okay to keep someone's child from them is when there is some form of danger present-either to the mother or the child-and there was no danger present and what Maggie did was selfish and petty.
And for Alice to be angry at Edward and think that he should be with the mother of his son just because of that reason shows how immature and horrible she is. She has treated every character poorly and I don't know why she does that. She treats Edward terribly for something that is none of her business and then she continually disrespects him.
Honestly, right now I am very disappointed in Alice, Maggie and Esme for treating Edward so terribly in a situation where he was the innocent party who didn't know he had a son.
Does this get addressed in the story?
This story is seriously so gripping. I can't wait for more!
Old Soul in Wonderland chapter 30 . 8/19/2015
Wow. I definitely did not expect that twist to happen. Just wow.
That being said, Evan is so freaking cute and it's obvious how much he loves Edward and Bella.
However I think I absolutely hate Maggie. I don't understand her reasoning at all and I think that she is selfish and horrible. She was spurned by Edward because she stupidly thought they were in a relationship and in revenge she NEVER tells him she's pregnant or having his baby? Instead, she lets another man raise his baby and then when Alice finds out, Maggie and Ben want nothing to do with Edward? Newsflash, it takes two to tango and she should have told Edward. Even if he was in a bad place in his life, even if she was angry because she felt like they should've been in a relationship, even if he was a an alcoholic, she still should have told him. Maybe she shouldn't have let him in Evan's life, but she should have at least told him.
I am appalled by her actions and I am appalled that no one seems to be angry on Edward's behalf. His family sided with Maggie and Maggie still tried to keep his son away from him. It is shocking and horrible and I am honestly utterly confused by that.
Anyway, this story is still gripping me and causing me intense emotions lol, and I would love to talk with you about it because I am very confused!
Thank you!
Old Soul in Wonderland chapter 17 . 8/17/2015
I just found this story and I think it is amazing. I love the way it is written and I just love the whole premise.
In the beginning I loved Bella. I loved that she was so self-less and took care d her dad, has no mother to speak of, and also put herself through school. She is a hard worker and I loved that she didn't know anything about pop culture and she just wants to help people.
In the beginning Edward annoyed the shit out of me. With his poor me attitude and acting as if he was the only person who has ever gone through hardships and treating everyone else like crap, it rather annoyed me.
After this chapter I am left feeling rather frustrated.
I was completely frustrated with the fact that Bella told Esward basically that his anger at Jasper is stupid and he needs to get over it and move on. I thought that was horrible of her and maybe she doesn't understand friendship. Jasper went behind his back to bang his little sister (who Edward hadn't really seen in years) and didn't tell him and Edward had to find out that it had been going on for MONTHS when he caught them in his bed. It was so completely disrespectful and such a betrayal of friendship and I honestly don't know his Edward would ever be able to get over that and trust Jasper again. It was hurtful and rude and Alice is a spoiled little brat who is awful. The thing she said about Carlisle being Edward's dad was horrific and shows that she is an immature child.
So knowing how horrible Alice has treated Edward and how much Jasper broke his trust, I don't know how Edward would ever be able to get over that and I thought it was rather rude of Bella to say that it doesn't make sense for him to be angry Now. Clearly Jasper was a shitty friend, why would you want that kind of person in your life?

I know this is a very heated review, but when Bella said that line to Edward, it just really got under my skin.
That being said, I still love this story. I am amazed that this slow burn is keeping my interest so intensely and I love how their relationship is evolving. I am so tense because I know there are going to be like a million twists and turns and I'm just blown away by this amazing story. I can't wait to continue reading and I think you're an amazing author.
Sorry if my review offended you in anyway, that was the last thing I wanted to do. But I think it's a compliment that you inspired such passion within me! :)
moreno.cheryl37 chapter 44 . 8/10/2015
I love your stories, you are a very talented writer! I have read three of your stories now and have loved all of them. True love way really grabbed my heart, I spent most of two days just reading. Loved them all, I'm going back for more. Thank you
Guest chapter 44 . 7/8/2015
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loved this story id only just discovered it
Thank You
xxxx
lesley
Toni Masen chapter 44 . 4/2/2015
Great story and wonderful characters. I would wish for you to go back to chapter 29 and to rewrite the story and have Bella say NO! It would make, I'm sure, for another very interesting story.
muffinmom chapter 44 . 2/3/2015
Just finished listening to this on my VoiceDream app. I loved this actorward!thx so much for sharing!
stephi910 chapter 44 . 1/6/2015
can't believe I only just found this story...loved it, and wished there was more!
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