|Reviews for To Be a Woman|
| idon'tedit chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I confess myself disappointed. The premise to this story seemed intriguing and I was rather excited to read it. But honestly just getting through this first chapter was like pulling teeth. I have only once in my life encountered a writing style that I find more annoying that yours, and I read a lot so that says something. I would be interested to see your legacy story stats and see if your views drop off after the first chapter. Your summary is written well enough to entice the reader, but then this writing choice where you spend the whole time talking to the reader as if they were your grandchild is so infuriating that I have a hard time imagining many people reading beyond the first paragraph let alone the first chapter.
That being said, structurally you are a good writer, so kudos on that.
| CecilieDK chapter 22 . 10/6/2012
Thanks for a lovely story - favoriting that and heading to your backlog of other stories.
| lepetitmorte chapter 22 . 8/21/2012
I have thouroughly enjoyed reading this story (at least twice) and hope your health has greatly improved since this January.
| iluvaqt chapter 22 . 6/6/2012
A wonderfully written tale awash with wit, humor and almost parody like. You got into Snape's head wonderfully and I always suspected an affection and even an admiration for Snape from Narcissa. Otherwise why would she charge him with Draco's protection? What would she have to have him swear an oath. He must have also felt something for her also besides a sense of responsibility for Draco as godfather. Enjoyed reading this a lot.
| AmyPond159 chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
reminds me of a fascinating soap opera with the end of a chapter leaving you going wait i missed something but you know you didn't because you know it will be explained next chapter
| xXxAllegraxXx chapter 22 . 3/8/2012
I loved your story! You weaved a wonderful tale around three strong characters that captivated me through all the chapters. I never knew with whom I wanted Hermione to end up with for Severus and Lucius are as different as two people can be. I think your ending is a very good solution, I like it a lot!
I'm sorry you had to get such a terrible diagnosis. I wish you all the strenght you need to fight it and all the good luck in the world.
| Her Royal Goddess chapter 22 . 1/18/2012
My dear wonderful Savva,
I'm sorry for not reviewing before now I'm just trying to catch up on all my favourite stories.
I must say that I'm only a tiny bit sad that Severus lost however I do think that Lucius was the best man in the end,he fought tooth and nail for Hermione and in the end that shone through.
I hope Severus will be happy with Narcissa.
Will there be a sequel with the two couples, I do hope so because I love your stories.
| LoriAnnRut chapter 22 . 1/15/2012
The story was good. The way you narrated it was different.
| MrsHermioneSeverusSnape chapter 22 . 12/31/2011
im so very sorry to say that i finished this story, damn all to hell you started the story with hermione and severus and it should have ended that way im sorry
| Ill.be.your.ALWAYS chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
Man, I never thought of Lucius as sexy until this story. You've opened up a whole knew ship to me..and I'm about to sail it hard. Dude he is too sexy... I'm liking this story..and I like Casimir too, very much actually!
| katiemarie090 chapter 7 . 12/11/2011
This story is a strange one, but in a marvelously good way! Normally I cannot stand when authors address their audiences so frequently in the story, but the quality of writing and the plot make up for that completely. And, since Lumione is my OTP, I'm having fun rooting for Lucius and then cheering when Severus slips up. This is a very fun story to read.
| Chevalier de Brillieu chapter 22 . 12/10/2011
Hm...a bit abrupt, but I'm glad Severus is getting his shot at a happy ending. Looking forward to your next story!
| Velvet Storm chapter 22 . 12/7/2011
YES! Just the way it should be! Oh I'm SO glad she chose Lucius. He's so much more deserving of her affections! ;) That was lovely, my dear.
| Sobeyda S. Dracul chapter 22 . 12/7/2011
Oh god! I love it! perfect End! :D
| villafoo chapter 22 . 12/7/2011
Yay she ended up with lucius! Never thought I would say that lol