|Reviews for Cancer Patient|
| kristine chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Very very sad! The story sort of moves too fast; this is the first chapter and it covers too many years. The skip in years throws me as does the past and present tenses. We would like to know more about how Lillian feels and why does she forget one son and not the other. Also Mike. Why is he leaving? Is this Lillian's story or Jacob's?
Cheyanna you have real talent and potential. Just take your time with your stories; get more into what everyone feels, more description so we get a feel for where we are.
Can't wait to read more! I love you Cheyanna!