I'm really liking this story and would love to read more. No updates in over 5 months? I really hope you come back to it...it would be a shame to leave your eager readers hanging.

Would love to see more - still planning on it?

I really like the first two chapters and hope that there will be more forthcoming.

Love your story, please update soon.

What a super start! Really looking forward to the rest. BTW (and just cause I'm anal), don't ever recall Kono being called Probie, it's Rookie, and Steve had already removed his face paint by the time they reached the courthouse in the tv episode, though obviously both he and Chin were very dirty.

"Danny, what's a bridal show?"

Danny laughed. "Isn't this the destination wedding hotspot? It's big shows where women go to find ways to break their wedding budget, and men fear to tread." The former SEAL actually looked a bit intimidated. "Don't worry, buddy. Now I'm driving."

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LMAO! As someone who frequents bridal shows as part of my job, I find this hysterically funny...and accurate!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hum... I want to see where you take this and how you tie it back in with Danny not sharing with Steve the whole story about StepStan.

Boy Danny got away from telling them anything but I'm afraid it will come back to bite him. Love the station play and another new food Chin introduced Danny too. Oh and the case does sound five 0 ish.

I went to three Islands in Hawaii a while back, Ohau, Kwaii and Maui. I loved the fishing town of Lahaina, that was where I noticed the first open mall where the walls are windows that slide open and then later noticed that places to eat had them too...beautiful...

Ok, sorry for that. I think showing chin and kono and how they worked in the office was so good it's just how the show does it and then Danny and Steve with interviewing witnesses was very well done. Looking forward to more. sue

First you music question there was an episode where Steve turned on the cd and Danny didn't want to listen to it. Don't quote me but it seemed more easy listening type music and maybe late 80's and 90's. Danny is a Springstein fan I know that from him and Mattie talking that's about all I can help you with, but I would thing late 80's early 90's on him to but with Bruce and Bonjovi, Southside Johnny all from Jersey would be in there too and they were all at the Stone Pony which Mattie said he and Danny went to.

Ok I love the story so far and how Danny reacted to Stan. How he deflected the questions and had to see if the team was ok. Kono was good at spotting that Danny wasn't telling all. I hope Danny has the hard drive , he did tell Hoffman that he had the tapes. I am computer challenged so I don't know how to get a tape to a flash drive..lol...I enjoyed the chapter. Sue

The image of Steve at bridal show is just too good...Thanks for that!

Love the banter, enjoy the case. Write more.

Sounds like you are coming up wth a very interesting case. I love the interaction between the characters. Danny and Steve bounce back from each other to perfection. Looking forward to your next chapter.

I like this. Write more!

Oh I'm loving this so far! I had one of those weeks and I'm just not catching up on reading fan fic... What on earth does Danny have in mind? (I do love Danny centered fic's there's so much Steve stuff out there but Danny is such and interesting character!)

Good start you've got going here. I look forward to more.