Reviews for Snivellus
WhiteFang001 chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Continue this please?

I think it'd make a very interesting multi-chapter story.

I really love the way that you wrote this - and the way that it gradually shifted to Sirius' point of view - never seen a Snivellus story from his side before :)

Please write more!
Frozen Emerald chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Poor nape. :(

I have to admit I can totally imagine that happening, with polka-dots and all.

I'm glad the four got hit, too. *evil grin*

The very last sentence was the crowning touch. :D
Rosalie'sRevenge chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I like this. I always wondered if any of the Marauders felt guilty for the way they'd treated Snape, especially as they got older...
EnchantedInk13 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Great characterization of the Marauders. I love how they interacted with each other and worked together, it was exactly like the way I imagine them. And I was so pleased by Sirius's little epiphany at the end. I'd be thrilled to see you continue this story, maybe have Snape and Sirius reconcile with one another.
Rue-the-Marauder chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I really liked this one as well. I think you really captured the way the Marauders function (or at least how they do in my eyes). It's definitely a prank they would pull. And as for the pre-slash, if you hadn't mentioned it I probably would have just taken it for remorse. Once again, great story.