|Reviews for leave me paralyzed, love|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
I blacked out before I even started. What did I just read? Some good descriptions, granted, but overall, I would have rather hit my head on a desk until I lost consciousness. Grammar! I know I'm not a Grammar Nazi, but I write for the state, and this is not how you do dialogue. Take your writing seriously. Otherwise, no one else will.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
| Michelle Tanner chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
I absolutely love this story. It sends shivers down my spine whenever I read it (which is often). My favorite part is the line "Sometimes, when Tori is gone, they (makelove) fuck," because somehow it sounds so poetic. All of your writing is very poetic, actually, but this line is especially. It feels like what they have could be beautiful but it's not, it's dirty and bad. You can try to trick yourself into thinking it's something sweet and soft, but it's just wrong. That's the feeling I get from that line. Anyway, I don't really know what reviews are supposed to be like so this one probably sucked, but that was my take away from this. You are an amazing writer and pleasepleaseplease keep writing stories (especially Candre, they're my favorite), because I will alwaysalwaysalways read them. :)
| ConceitedReality chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
| dazedcat chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
:'( It was all happy at the beginning and then suddenly it just... turned sad. I don't even like this couple that much but I loved this[:
| brucewaynes chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
FUUUUUU I DON'T EVEN SHIP THESE TWO SO WHY DO I LOVE THIS WHY GOD WHYYYY. /endcaps
this is like, perfect and heartbreaking and why you gotta be such an amazing writer because it's making me all asdfghjkl;
ugh just like i have this ache-y feeling in my chest now and idk, foo. it's just, like. it hurts, you know?
LOL I HAVE NO IDEA WTH I'M SAYING BUT THIS IS PERFECT AND YOUR WRITING IS PERFECT FLAWLESS ETC ETC ETC WRITE MOAR.
| liketheyknowthescore chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
You just ripped my heart into a million pieces.
I loved this, so flawlessly written.
| IzzyandDesRoxSox chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Augh, this fic was so beautiful! I loved eveyr part of it! You have hcnaged my ways from Tandré to the best Victorious couple in the world- Candré! XD
| JadeBeckOTP chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Oh, this is totally not how I would want Cat & Andre's relationship to go, but this was beautiful. My favorite line is:
"Andre calls her Little Red and it sounds like I love you."
Perfect. It sounds so sweet when to me when he calls her little red. Almost like it means something else, and defines it.3
| lightning veins chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
can you just tell me like how is this even possible why are you so good at writing and i can't even form coherent thoughts right now but god, it hurts in the best possible way and after reading this i was left wanting but i'm not sure what and THIS IS SO LOVELY. "she knows the shape of his hands because she watches them when he talks." my breath actually caught when i read that. holyshitcakes good.
by just reading this, i think i'm seriously considering becoming a hardcore cat/andre fan!girl. and i don't really ship andre with anyone and hadn't planned on it at all but this is just so PERFECT. your cracky oneshots are going to be the death of me, i swear. anyway, faving (if you didn't already guess that). and excuse this terrible review. and your writing is amazing. and you are amazing.
| seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
SAMI THANK YOU FOR SHATTERING MY HEART INTO A MILLION PIECES.
also lol the valentine's day thing I KNOW YOU STOLE THAT FROM ME WOMAN BUT IT'S OKAY BECAUSE I LOVE YOU ANYWAYS. nhxfdkhfdsk my review is going to suck, omg, it already does, but, uh, you're awesome and this is awesome and flawless and sad and ew tandre but candre is present and poor cat omg the carving his name into her wrists that's so pretty i can't even.
...YEAH OKAY I'M LEAVING ILU.
| DramaticStarlet chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
really. how could he do that to poor little cat. :(
this is seriously probably one of my favorite things i've ever read for victorious. i mean really, this was just so incredibly twisted and beautiful and relatable to my life and EVERYTHING.
i love this. i can't explain how much.
| aloxi chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
aklsdfjhga oh my god, did you just make me ship this? REALLY?
i think the quote at the beginning is super-appropriate, btw. this has cemented my belief that cat/andre would be, like, seriously tragic. D: anyway, i like how their relationship isn't really defined at all the them (or, you know, anyone), and how they'r ejust so fucked up and gah. EVERYTHING, BASICALLY.
"(he tastes like toritoritoritoritori.)"
LMFAO I TOTALLY READ THAT LAST PART AS "TACO" AT FIRST. I AM JUST SAYING. forgive my bad reading skillz, yo.
excellent job. :D
| Masquerading with Shadows chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
YOU'RE IN MY HEAD, I TELL YOU.
this is basically perfect, and practically the same idea i had in my head, give or take a little. honestly, for andré uncertainty, to her inevitable heartbreak, is was amazingly in character. particularly cat, or at least my!cat.
wow, just wow. and this is such a crappy review, but i really did love it, particularly the way you described their kisss, and, "André calls her Little Red and it sounds like I love you,"; the way he's like her anchor, and the whole promise section.
great job. :D
| DariusWOW chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Nice work. and I think you were correct when you said you turned him into fanon beck.