Reviews for Umbrella
mk chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
awwww I love reading a good fluff fanfic:D:D
SaturnXK chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
"Indeed. It's against my upbringing to leave a woman such as yourself out in the rain without adequate protection. For God's sake! You aren't even wearing a proper jacket!" he exclaimed, taking in her attire for the first time. "So would you like to join me on my walk home?" he asked.

Hahaha XD So formal. So Neji.
princesshyuuga01 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
That was perfectly written. Smooth as always. And lol yup that was fluffy! Aww nejiten! Is so cute. I totally visualize the whole scene in my head! It was strikingly adorable! Thts wat i like about ur stories! They are like vivid movies in my head. Awesome job.


xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Awww I love it, your writing style is so mesmorizing, I wish I could write like you
Seiji and Shizuku 4ever chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
*has a spastic attack* OMG! HOW ADORABLY..erm, ADORABLE! DDD

Wow, I'm in awe of your work everytime I read it. Excellent writing style, fluid detail, wow, just brilliant all-in-all! Amazing job with this! _

I LOVE meetings like this..x333
Wolfie the Love Warrior chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
It was an excellently written story

...Until I saw the end.

Don't take it personlly.

The story was marvelous!

I do consider you make it longer though.

If the story just ends there, it seems incomplete.

Other than that, excellent work! )
I C Y U R O K chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its as fluffy as ? clouds are fluffy
someone chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
BRING ON THE FLUFF! ;p such a cute oneshot!
DarkAnonymous324 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Great job. This was great
Dcfan100 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
How do you come up with these so fast? XD I love it! Very sweet and fluffy! :D Now one little teeny tiny nitpick, isn't it spelled hyuga? IDK, anywho, great job!
SeiraXD chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
It was very sweet, I enjoyed it a lot _