Reviews for Loyal Subordinate
Kare Uta chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I totally enjoyed reading this work from you; I think it was such a great thing to see and the perfect little extension to this ending in the game. It's always pleasant to sort of take a peak into these moments.

You're...really really good at writing smut! I haven't written that type of smut in ages but you've definitely pushed me into the mood to do it again... I always love sex between Shiki and Akira too; it's always so primal, yet a bit sadistic with it; it's really intense like that!

Your writing style is really fluid and you balance things perfectly between Akira's side of things and Shiki's, and it's a great thing to be able to do because you sort of get the full picture when that happens.

I enjoyed reading this! Great job on it!
NekoGirl2BusyWriting2Flirt chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Write more.