|Reviews for Lelouch vi Britannia, the 99th Emperor|
| Littica Marek chapter 12 . 3/3
I have be be honest here, I can not say Im having much fun reading this.
Dont get me wrong the plots not half bad, a bit too weak at point development wise but not half bad, the real problem is the wording, dialogue and flow.
Words that should be in places are missing, or places where another word would fit better leads to sentences feeling disjointed.
My advice would be to get a beta or Proofread what you write a few more times
| azul120 chapter 17 . 3/1
Whew, finally. I wonder if Tohdoh will still be ok with what hee hears. (Again, I have a feeling that the deaths of Katase and Kirihara were more incidental than intentional. Lelouch apparently felt saving the former was too risky and went for the immediate tactical advantage.)
You did ask what to do for a rewrite for Changing Course, and in addition to the aforementioned detail regarding the JLF, and also regarding this, I think doing a full recap of a scene as you did with Euphie getting geassed is a bit much. (Semi-OT: Regarding Changing Course, you should leave the revelation of Marianne where it was in canon because it had maximum shock value for the characters. Also, their Villainous Breakdown mid-disintegration felt more climactic.)
| Scientist17 chapter 17 . 2/27
Gahh can't wait. So much Suzaku bashing, me like
| Grey Wolf4 chapter 17 . 2/27
This is another great update and you've portrayed everyone well and well the part at the end was well done as for Lelouch starting the rebellion well it was to ensure a better world from what I saw of this fic if I remember earlier chapters Lelouch in this thought it would happen if he were Emperor of Britannia.
| OMAC001 chapter 17 . 2/24
So Lelouch explains what happened with Euphie! That will brun some bridges! Hope you update soon!
| REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 17 . 2/22
well done keep it up of good work.
| OBSERVER01 chapter 17 . 2/21
so far so good
| tsun chapter 17 . 2/21
Its been years. It started in 2011 and now its already 2014.
The story will just start where everything will be fix. I'm willing to wait for more to see the ending or the continuation of the story.
| The King of the Game chapter 1 . 2/21
To Doom Marine 54: Stop reading if you do not like it. Suzaku is a traitor to his country for killing their leader and enlisting in the Britannian military and Suzaku chose to carry the FLEIJA warhead into battle despite knowing his Geass handicap and being warned by Lloyd not to do it.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 2/21
Terrible, I can already tell this is just going to be a lot of Suzaku bashing. In response to your little rant in the story. Suzaku killed his father because if he didn't Japan would have been destroyed, also Lelouch is responsible for Nunnally's death because it was his "live" geass that made Suzaku use the Flieja.
| bloodshark chapter 17 . 2/21
simply amazing great battles great everything just amazing can't wait for more
| WraithReaper chapter 17 . 2/21
Can't wait for the next one!
| god of all chapter 17 . 2/21
Great chapter and story so far places continue this story soon.
| Shadowzero21 chapter 17 . 2/21
I am very happy to see this new chapter!
| Saint River 2.0 chapter 17 . 2/21
There is a funny backstory on how I found out you have updated your fic. But enough of that. It's about damn time you update. Kept me waiting for months.
Now that the actions all said and done, it is time for words.