Reviews for Watermelon
Izzyaro chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Aw, that was adorable. You wrote Inui absolutely perfectly; I can definitely see him doing something like this. Great job!
Lonceng Angin chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Uhm, when I read about Inui carrying that heart-shaped watermelon, I almost shrieking in laughter. Worse, I still in class.

Your story is excelent. I am agree that you're epitome of genius. Inui action is so, so like Inui. And Kaidoh reaction, too.

I don't know about grammar. But I think it is nothing wrong there.
Reader chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Awww)) They are always cute but this was extra fluffy and awww-inducing.
Still think that this pair should be called "adorable". And Inui is a delight.
Lovegranted chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
completely. adorable! kawaii! I really liked your characterization of the two... xD Kaidoh-kun, you're too innocent

anyways, leave it to Inui to grow a heart-shaped watermelon, I trust it tasted normal though? I like Inui's symbology, although there's not much of that in fanfiction... for a reason, I mean, c'mon who wants to actually think about what they're reading? xD

The Emerald pair was a really fascinating combo for me when I first started the canon, (I eventually went with MomoKai, but I still like this pairing!), so when I found this story (while searching through my favs) I knew I had to make a review :)

nice usage of Japanese! not too overboard, but just enough to make it sweet... thanks for the story!
jo chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
AWHHHHH! I love it. :D
TutkaKid chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
That was just adorable, I was fangirl-ing through the entire thing xD haha if anyone could grow a heart-shaped watermelon it would be Inui haha
aiaiai chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Aww... A heart-shaped watermelon :D it should definitely be possible to grow one. If I had any skill in growing watermelons, I would try.
emerusmerlinus chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
OMFG! This was so good... I wonder why it does not have more reviews... it's so Inui and Kaido... Love it... keep writing
lee chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
inui and kaidoh are too cute here! awwww~~

and i love the heart-shaped watermelon haha!
Cold-Snow1925 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
it's is true! There are watermelons in the shape of hearts! And they do come from Japan!
Fadey chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
A great story! It's just so Inui and Kaidoh... -Giggles- A heart-shaped watermelon? I'm gonna order one from Inui! :D

Faoiltierna chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
That was very, very sweet and...romantic in the way that only those two can be. :-)

I shared:

i"Were the person to accept my watermelon –representing my heart– and consequently eat it, its symbolic meaning would be that my heart would be completely destroyed by the person. Alternatively, by dividing it and then consuming it together with the object of my affections, its symbolic meaning is much less angsty. Don't you think?"/i

with a friend, and we both agreed that it absolutely rocked :-) Geek Love for the Win!
AnimegirlYuki chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
niiiiice! is all i can say :)
Tiffany F chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
I don't celebrate the day, personally, but this was too cute to pass up. You nailed Kaidoh perfectly. And, would you like winter? We've got over four inches of snow on the ground and I can't stand the stuff. I'd be happy to send the clouds your way. ;)
rebirthreborn chapter 1 . 2/15/2011

I think you are into literature, using watermelon as a symbol, which is really a good one. Never thought watermelons are good Valentine's gift. xD

I honestly love this piece of writing. It's really good.