Reviews for Forging Destiny
Shinobi Gatana chapter 2 . 16h
Great start
budjul1611975 chapter 27 . 9/21
SMF-3? Like Serbian Red Berets,Russian Spetsnaz,German former GSG-9,or U.S Seal Team 6?
Corwyn chapter 38 . 7/31
Loved this story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 38 . 7/11
Continua por favor
csheila chapter 34 . 7/8
Albus’s true creepiness shines in this chapter. The total control
csheila chapter 32 . 7/8
Games and food are the best way to introduce cultures
csheila chapter 26 . 7/7
I loved the pranks

Enjoyed the conversation between Minerva and the Hat
csheila chapter 24 . 7/7
Love seeing Dumble’s panic.

Annoying to massage Ron’s ego, but he’s only 13
csheila chapter 23 . 7/7
Loved your method. The twins had a great cover story
csheila chapter 22 . 7/7
Great job with Harry’s responses
csheila chapter 2 . 7/6
Nice amount of information in a short amount of time.

csheila chapter 1 . 7/6
Great start

It’s true Harry is young and abused so he probably should making avoid major changes. But he has limited options and by now even Hogwarts isn’t safe
Ultach chapter 30 . 6/20
Every time you write INERTLY the context requires INTERNALLY.

As I often do, I recommend Chambers 21st Century OR Oxford English Dictionaries.

Dear Miss. book addict chapter 38 . 6/11
i dont see any update!
Rowan Mikaio chapter 8 . 5/27
Probably an unpopular opinion and a decade late, but I don’t like this. Harry met Sirius days ago. He’s 13 years old and also abused. It’s the height of irresponsibility to allow him to “consent” to permanent, magically binding changes.

Harry is highly emotional and lacks perspective. Even asking his opinion is suspect because of power dynamics and emotional maturity. I know this is fiction but this is emotionally manipulative at its most generous.

It’s not what Sirius *intends* but in effect it’s similar to your suggested theory of “dumbledore and hogwarts is your savior from the Dursleys”. Except it’s “Sirius is your savior from dumbledore.” They’re highly analogous for one being explicitly called out in the story as bad.

Effect is “emotionally developing teen is extremely grateful to adult figure who saves him from abuse. Teen can’t put it into perspective and agrees to saviors suggestions”. It’s too raw and too new for Harry to make rational decisions on the situation.

I sympathize with Sirius’ intentions here, but this is about what Sirius wants and not what is healthy for Harry.
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