Reviews for Forging Destiny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great start |
![]() ![]() ![]() SMF-3? Like Serbian Red Berets,Russian Spetsnaz,German former GSG-9,or U.S Seal Team 6? |
![]() ![]() Loved this story! Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() Continua por favor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Albus’s true creepiness shines in this chapter. The total control |
![]() ![]() ![]() Games and food are the best way to introduce cultures |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the pranks Enjoyed the conversation between Minerva and the Hat |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love seeing Dumble’s panic. Annoying to massage Ron’s ego, but he’s only 13 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your method. The twins had a great cover story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with Harry’s responses |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice amount of information in a short amount of time. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start It’s true Harry is young and abused so he probably should making avoid major changes. But he has limited options and by now even Hogwarts isn’t safe |
![]() ![]() Every time you write INERTLY the context requires INTERNALLY. As I often do, I recommend Chambers 21st Century OR Oxford English Dictionaries. Ciao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont see any update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Probably an unpopular opinion and a decade late, but I don’t like this. Harry met Sirius days ago. He’s 13 years old and also abused. It’s the height of irresponsibility to allow him to “consent” to permanent, magically binding changes. Harry is highly emotional and lacks perspective. Even asking his opinion is suspect because of power dynamics and emotional maturity. I know this is fiction but this is emotionally manipulative at its most generous. It’s not what Sirius *intends* but in effect it’s similar to your suggested theory of “dumbledore and hogwarts is your savior from the Dursleys”. Except it’s “Sirius is your savior from dumbledore.” They’re highly analogous for one being explicitly called out in the story as bad. Effect is “emotionally developing teen is extremely grateful to adult figure who saves him from abuse. Teen can’t put it into perspective and agrees to saviors suggestions”. It’s too raw and too new for Harry to make rational decisions on the situation. I sympathize with Sirius’ intentions here, but this is about what Sirius wants and not what is healthy for Harry. |