|Reviews for Alternate Ending|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/14
Continue it, please. I really do like it, but the chapters are quite short and Nathaniel is barely like himself. Just some constructive criticism.
| Hopeful person chapter 5 . 8/5/2014
Can you pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase finish it? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
| Unknown chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/20/2014
Thought this was written a lot like the actual book. Could of fooled me. Very well written
| LilyMelany chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
Oh my goodness! Dun duh dun.
| LilyMelany chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Omg can't wait for more! & awww *sniffle & start bawling* the precious cuteness!
| mxdnxghtlxve chapter 5 . 2/19/2012
| I'm not a piece in their games chapter 5 . 1/27/2012
Please continue I love the book Fever and i like this ending although i think you aught to actually put that Mattie and Nathaniel fall in love the book did not really say but i always wanted them to *Sighs* Romance"
~I Equal Awesome.~
| DestinyDempster chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
Abiguity? Really? I expect an update soon.
| Princess of Rose chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
How did she get in the balloon in the first place?
| Annabeth Lovegood chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
This is a great alternate ending I really love it! YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE!
| DestinyDempster chapter 4 . 10/22/2011
...So you're going to finish this, right?
| Insert a Catchy Penname Here chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
AW...SO ADORABLE AND SAD! *Weeps*
| Elegant Lady of Sin chapter 4 . 9/29/2011
Yay! I can't wait. :)
| Hydei chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
take all the time u need! i recently found out how hard getting ideas onto paper can be and im sure everyone else here knows too! I was so happy just to get some news, so thanx! :)