Reviews for Blood of the Birds
soxmanyxfandoms chapter 45 . 1/12
I've spent a while reading this story over the last few days, and I know it's a bit strange to review it 4 years after it was posted, but it is too good not to. Every now and then you come across an absolute gem of a story, and this is one of those. Your take on Albus was especially captivating, and the friendship between the trio is something I wish I could have. I was positively sobbing for the last 10 chapters or so. You have created a beautiful story that you have every right to be proud of.
Guest chapter 45 . 1/10
The second Romanian sentence is wrong, the correct translation is: De unde ai venti?
I really liked you story :)
feathersparks149 chapter 45 . 8/19/2014
Ah I just re read this and I love it a lot! The subplot of Hugo and Nigel's story is my favourite part and can you please please please write ANYTHING else just about them like a fluffy one shot or a whole thing I don't even care but if you don't I'll have to and that makes no sense :P
also using American names (PJ, Madison etc) is just slightly buggy to me because nobody at Hogwarts would be called almost any of you OC's names, not that it matters too much but just some constructive criticism :)
I really like this story and thanks for putting so much work into it!
nuts4nargles chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
I called it! I so called it! As soon as you introduced Nigel and talked about Nigel and Hugo hanging out together I just knew! I love that so much! But I still feel really bad for Hugo that he feels like his father won't accept him! Anyway, I love this story!
silverlovedragoness chapter 45 . 7/4/2014
I've been reading this avidly for the past 5 days and even giving up a little bit of sleep! I'm very pleased with how it's turned out, though there were quite a few moments I was completely baffled by plot choices...but in the end it worked out quite nicely! I especially loved the concurrent one shots you wrote, for the insight they gave not only warmed my heart, but at some points, for lack of better wording, gave me such feels! I am still dying to know about what Albus' past is like...regarding his true parentage...and how the functionality worked out regarding if Albus was really Scorpius' blood brother, what happened to Ginny and Harry's original child...or otherwise, what happened to the black haired little boy Astoria clearly had. If you've got the futures available, I'd like to read those as well.
Thanks so much for this fun ride,
CakePOPBookBOX chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
fencerforever chapter 6 . 2/2/2014
A Very Potter Musical reference FTW!
Enchiladas14 chapter 10 . 1/16/2014
Bloody s***! Its the ring with the Stone in it isnt it. The bloody Gaunt ring!, OMG I love your story's way of bringing the deathly Hallows into it! Sorry if I'm reviewing too much :-[
Enchiladas14 chapter 9 . 1/15/2014
In your picture of the story, why does Albus' picture has the actor of Peeta? They dont look nice... :(
Enchiladas14 chapter 8 . 1/15/2014
But, didnt Harry break the Elder Wand after repairing his own pheonix feather cored one? And seriously Nice skin? Is Caitlin like Ginny? Potters fall with red heads not mouseheads or whatever...
ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 45 . 12/10/2013
Great story :D What did happen to Knox and Dominique? Did Al and Ginny make amends? Did Al ever pursue his brief belief that Astoria could be his mother? I'm going to miss this story so much!
MightyGryffindor chapter 22 . 12/1/2013
I'm sorry, but I did look over the little things, like getting the banishing spell completely wrong and what it is used for, but around chapter 20, after getting to it being Al that was the spy, with no repercussions, which is totally unbelievable, to allowing Astoria to be the head auror just over Ron's promise, which the oath wouldn't have meant squat in as it was only his employment, he could not give her his job, this story has became completely off the wall, and totally unbelievable. Sorry, but it was a good story until then, and after chapter 20, I couldn't stomach it any more.
athenasowl3271 chapter 45 . 12/1/2013
Wow um I don't even know where to begin with this story it was so good! I guess I'll just go with James because I can't believe you killed him! I was sobbing every time you mentioned his name and you may think I'm kidding but I'm not I went into like a fetal positional and just cried. I kind of wish you had Scorpious tell Rose where James was and what he was doing since Scorpious did see James when he died. It would have helped her move on well and everyone else move on for that matter. Oh my gosh when you put Remus and Tonks in the dead place I was like AHHHHH. Anyway onto Albus I think he wouldn't have been able to get through everything without Iliana (which I so called was a muggle born) I think they're really cute! I really like his dragons although wouldn't it have been impossible for Zephry to leave the others since they're bound? I REALLY WANT YOU TO WRITE ANOTHER STORY WITH THEIR KIDS THIS IS ME PLEADING TO YOU! It would make me so happy could you please? Pretty please? I'll leave you really long reviews like this one! Anyway back to this story I totally ship Lysander and Lily I could never pick who to put Lysander with but I've decided! Although in this story their relationship just seems to be built on mutual grief for James as well as Lysanders ability to look over Lily's werewolfness (?). I really want to know what happened to Dominique and Knox because I really liked them as a couple so if you want to PM what you were planning also what happened to Lucy? Did she ever fall in love again or is she still grieving over Lorcan because theirs no way he would want that. Anyway I really hope you keep writing:)
Icephoenixfire chapter 45 . 11/25/2013
I love how the epilogue ties up everything really nicely; once again, I'd like to say this is the most brilliant Fanfiction story I have read. ;D In summation of all my previous reviews, your plot arc is so intricate and perfectly planned and your writing itself is beautiful - really, thank you for putting so much time and effort into writing this. ;D
cocoa123 chapter 45 . 11/22/2013
That was so beautiful. Thank you so much for finishing this masterpiece. I'm so sad that it's over! I was wondering what you thought would happen to Lucy in the epilogue.
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