Reviews for The Downfall of Greed
61394 chapter 30 . 5/17/2016
good story
Lady Reese Kightkens chapter 30 . 1/20/2016
Wow, what a story! I could not put this one down. You did a great job writing Lucius into a character that you start out hating and then end up loving without making the transition unrealistic. I did find your writing of Hermione a little weak and too vulnerable at times, but overall, you did a great job developing her into falling for Lucius. It was intense and gave me shivers at times. Overall, you did a fantastic job!
mistyARfan chapter 17 . 5/21/2014
Thinking back to a previous chapter, I wonder if Severus said something to her to make her say that he will rescue her. But she could have been delusional at the time too. I guess I'll ha e to wait and see.
real talk chapter 21 . 2/8/2014
Hold up. You were doing so well until this chapter. No way in hell, does Her mine return to the Manor knowing that soon she will be given to Colden ort and seeing the Wesley be killed. You have turned her too quickly and have made this story not realistic anymore. So done! Man, and I was hoping for not a letdown...
NordicGirl chapter 30 . 1/6/2014
I cant believe i read this, it was so long..(in one night) But being very happy that i did, great work! Loved the Thomas - Bella name part in the end!
ThePenIsMighty chapter 30 . 8/2/2013
Guest chapter 30 . 2/12/2013
Yeah :) Enjoyed your fic, thought it was really well written and I loved this Lucius, a great combination of evil bastard and good guy. Thanks!
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 30 . 10/9/2012
Brilliant! Xxx
Sinoritta chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
Very nice beginning) Just love it)
CoffeeRambler chapter 30 . 7/2/2012
Such a touching story. I admire your editing skills and the way you were able to make Lucius Malfoy, a formidable death eater, into a loving and tender man without ruining his character. Bravo!
MioneWatson chapter 30 . 6/17/2012
Great story!
Fremione-lover16 chapter 30 . 6/10/2012
THANK THE LORD! I thought for sure that you were going to make the ending all sad and kill one of them! I'm so happy you didnt! :) but anyway,it was really good! I loved it :) it's really different from the stuff I usually read,but different is good lol. :)

Genia. :)
alice1239 chapter 30 . 4/28/2012
aww loved the story ... hope it could have gone throught the pregnancy ... :D
SlytherinPrincess38 chapter 30 . 10/16/2011
The story was absolutely amazing! Incredible! I can't get enough of it :) It's so well written. I can't wait to read more of your fanfics :)
AprilLeigh94 chapter 30 . 9/29/2011
truly magnificant! i loved it SEQUEL? although it did keep me from studying hahahaha
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