Reviews for Rehearsal
Hika Hitachiin chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I liked it,but there was no sex.(-_-)
TeenTop4everawesomeness chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Awesome :D it was really cute\naughty of karou to feel Hikaru up in his sleep haha XD i loved the story. well done _
Kera chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
"Rehearsing for host club duties?" *giggles* Oh that is such a perfect panic moment line. This was really well written, I like how Kaoru wasn't weak, it was very in character for the twins. *reads last line*... LOVE IT!
lordlosslove chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
I'm a huge fan of the twins and did not think i'd like that but for some sick reason I really enjoyed that. Especially the last line. that was kinda funny. _
Purple chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
oh wow. the whole time i was all "aw, hikaru's such a lil teaser" i luv luv luv that :D and the last line killed me. pure comedy gold.
BlaCk fEAtheR WASTEland chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Very well-written! Keep up the good work! _

Neah Walker
SilverWillowMusic Inc chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Oh, so very, very nice. Deep thought and just the right amount of angst, with a nice bit of smexiness to close.

I like the slight role reversal here of Kaoru making the move on Hikaru. ;)
princessciel chapter 1 . 3/28/2011

He remained silent.

"Kaoru, I know you're awake. Look at me."

*Me; OH SHIT!*


You can't really fake the chemistry we have," Hikaru said. "Obviously you knew that since you just felt me up like that."

"I guess I did," Kaoru said, laughing a little.

As far as either was concerned, they were two parts of a whole, incomplete without the other. They shared everything: blood, sweat, tears, laughter, and love. They shared a brief kiss before trying to go back to sleep, not bothering to move.



"Next time," he said, half-jokingly. "If you want to molest me, just ask instead of doing it and disrupting my sleep."

kay hika ill molest you and pretend its karou :D
wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
great story. it was really well written :)

and that last line was hilarious XD
Danial A. Bane chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
hahahaha nice ending dude but you should go into more detail as far as the love making goes
Made of Ossum chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I really liked this! I can't believe it only has two reviews. I thought you did a good job on it! :D I especially loved the last line. XD Oh, Hikaru.
Softside chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Haha, epic ending. love it!
AkumaStrife chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Oh yeah, Kaoru, just turn over and Hikaru won't notice you were humping him; makes total sense! XD

Anyways, even though this was smut, it was also really fluffy ) which is a nice change. Sigh, i do so love midnight romps.

Receiving such a lovely(and steamy) gift makes me feel like an ass for not getting around to your V day present. And so~ i shall write you a poem to make up for it!


Roses are Red

Violets are Blue

Yaoi is really hot

And so is Twincest

oh wait, that didn't rhyme...let's try this again.

Roses are Red

Violets are Blue

Every time you throw away my trash

Ike takes Marth against a wall

uh...that doesn't sound right either; one more chance?

Roses are Red

Violets are Blue

I love it best

When roleplaying with you

There _

happy late valentine's day! (let's celibrate by having Pit get molested 83 at least someone will be getting some action then.)