|Reviews for Wings Of Arcadia|
| FusionCore chapter 1 . 1/24
liked this stors too bad you dont seem to continue it
| The Prophet chapter 24 . 2/15/2014
The king of crows has at last been sighted. Soon the unclean shall be torn asunder...
| HawkRider chapter 24 . 11/1/2013
You'd better give us the next chapter sooner than this one.
Well, this was intense. I'm looking forwards to seeing what will happen next. This is one cliff hanger you must NOT wait to WORK!
| David Noklevername chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Most either really LOVE their first chapter, or hate it. Don't worry about it, happens to all authors. :P Usually, I don't have a high esteem for a work before it's published. And, if I do, I immediately find all it's faults. :D
| cheyenne chapter 22 . 4/18/2013
By far this is the best chapter. it just gave me chills reading it. Keep it up! and Night of blue shadow is just awesome, cant wait for the next chapter.
| DaniPotterLovesGod chapter 23 . 3/28/2013
Ha, I love the nickname for scythey. Dudebro!
Yeah, I have noticed your style has changed a little again. If you get your inspiration to write like that from a book, maybe I need to get this book. You are more descriptive than ever!
I honestly think Dudebro is the Grim Reaper or Death. Or maybe not. Maybe he's part of an organization that are all reapers!
Happy Easter! God bless!
| HawkRider chapter 23 . 3/27/2013
Hmm... Definitely Death in some form, maybe an incarnate or embodiment...
Well, this was interesting to read. I wonder just what will happen to Riku though...
Also, I wonder what is happening to the Heartless? Are they evolving? Or are they even Heartless?
As for that quote... I know Uzuki says something similar in WEWY, but otherwise...
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/27/2013
That was awesome! You did a great job on this chapter!
| Thanatos's Scribe chapter 21 . 2/13/2013
Just wondering, will Sora and the rest of the crew end up in a place like Epic Mickey because it would be awesome if that happened!
| HawkRider chapter 21 . 1/26/2013
That was certainly a long but interesting chapter... I'm really not sure what happened to Riku at the end...
Still, I'm eager to find out what's going to happen to Riku now. And if the others will find him...
Anyway, this was a brilliant chapter. That was an excellent fight scene! As long as it was...
Still, great job! I really can't wait to read the rest of the story!
| DaniPotterLovesGod chapter 21 . 1/24/2013
I think you did well with Jadis' lines. I'm not sure if this would help, but try reading The Magician's Nephew. Jadis actually has quite a few lines. What you wrote is what she would say.
You really like Riku whump, don't you? First, he gets a concussion on the RLS Legacy, then angst, and now this! I'm not criticizing you. I love Riku or any character whump. And Ansem coming in at the end? What'll happen next?
| Cheyenne chapter 20 . 12/6/2012
I love Skyra in the room when she gave sora a point for landing into riku. That was funny. I can't wait to c the world they go to and I want to see what happens to cloud. I'm scared for him. But I also noticed in the last chapter that Mickey gave sora a collar with a bolt on it. Is that bolt? That's cool if it is.
| Cheyenne chapter 19 . 12/6/2012
I love this chapter. By far Alexa this has been my favorite. I love Ardeo, he's just too cute. Keep up the work!
| CrystalRainstorm chapter 20 . 10/24/2012
OHMYGOD. NARNIA? REALLY?!
I love you so much!
Okay, so in this short time, I can tell that your writing style has REALLY improved. The fighting scenes are even better than usual, and I loved the dynamic characters of Donald and Goofy that are being revealed here. Hooray for bringing in other Disney movies!
Also, I really like how Skyra is trying to be somewhat nice to Riku, even though she's ridiculously pissed off at him. Is that hinting at something? Or is Riku destined to be the Forever Alone guy? XD
I can NOT believe that Cloud is about to die... And you know what mental image I had while reading that scene? That cliff in Advent Children.
ACK. I shall await the next chapter impatiently!
| HawkRider chapter 20 . 10/24/2012
I can tell you right now that the World is based on the Narnia books (please don't ask me to think up a name, all I got was Narnia when I did it...)
Well, this was a very good chapter. I really enjoyed it. And don't worry about that little thing in Chapter 17...
And I agree with you on that last scene. I hope Denzel and Marlene are all right.