Reviews for Nexus
evilgiraffe82 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Everyone likes a blind date story! This one was enjoyable although simple – I thought there could have been a bit more exploration of the characters and their motivations. Why has Bella been resisting Alice's suggestion for so long, for instance? Why is Edward reliant on his cousin to set him up with girls? But then, that's the mark of a good story - it makes you want to know more. The flow of this story is very different to what I'd normally read – I don't usually read stories that are so dialogue-rich. Having said that, it's nice to read something in a different style to my usual choice! Well done on writing a neat little story, and thank you so much for entering the contest!