Reviews for Sideline Collision
MissingDublin chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Wow that was hot! I guess Bella really wants that reed.
Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Gah. This was super fun.

Love love love a feisty Bella and a cocky Edward. And I especially adore that she gave him the number to the music store.

Favorite line: "You could still have a cock hidden in there somewhere."

Thanks for this! And good luck on the contest.
kelysuperficial chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Aw! Cute! Well, as cute as a locker room fuck can be ;-)

I love college stories...*sings* Glory Days...

Thanks bb!
TwilightMomofTwo chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
cute...but Edward's a douche...and wait, it's complete? Nuh-uh, girlfriend. Seems to me like there's lots more story to tell...say you'll continue.
shasta53 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Too cute! I love it. He's such a stereotypical QB and she's pretty much a band girl!
WritingFicariously chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
You already know my initial thoughts on this. Seriously, Edward is SUCH a cocky bastard in this fic and I know I should hate him just on THAT characteristic but I have to admit... It's kind of hot. I'm sure I only think it's sexy because I don't have to deal with him in real life.

I love that Bella's a little sassy spitfire yet it's not over the top and completely unbelievable. It's more that she seems to have been pushed to her limit when it comes to jerky jocks. Hehe.

That locker scene was hot. I have a special place in my heart for F&T's locker scene but this one's crazy wicked. I love-love-loved the undressing scene. Edward egging Bella on and Bella responding by just taking off her clothes like it's not a big deal at all... Priceless! And that sex. Um. Whoa.

How does a girl find a hot scene like this to actually live?
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