|Reviews for Nami VS Hancock|
| LUNA Shipper chapter 23 . 9/5
I almost cried at the part where luffy told nami "I love you"
i was just so happy,and what a nice way to end off the story man good job,hope you make a sequel
| Cynical Madness chapter 23 . 8/25
For such a simple title, it has alot if complex story. Bravo
| Vi ChaN91312 chapter 23 . 8/15
its funny when luffy keep calling her name yet dont get a chance to talk with her xD nice story btw
| xMousex chapter 23 . 7/27
Don't listen to the reviewers who said that this story sucked or anything along those lines. Because this story was amazing.
I feel like you actually did correctly portray both Nami and Hancock. Nami wasn't perfect, so I don't understand why some reviewers were annoyed by that. In the story they would constantly call her a witch, and Nami even admitted she was a manipulative thief. Something canon Nami wouldn't mind saying. And Hancock wasn't seen as an annoying bitch all the time either; Chopper, Mitsuki, and Nami all disliked her but Franky, Sanji, Usopp, and Brook didn't seem to have had a problem with her. All in all, you showed that Nami isn't a goody two shoes and that Hancock actually had a heart.
Anyway. Though some points in the story were a bit unrealistic, like none of them noticing Nami's disappearance despite most of them having haki, the rest of the story was amazing! I loved the scenes where Nami and the girls worked together to try to defeat the men on the ship. You made me fall in love with those OCs! I especially loved Mitsuki, she really is like a mini Nami and it must have been hard for her to find enough money to get back her sister in the New World of all places!
I'm glad you made it so that Robin didn't interfere with Nami and Luffy's relationship. In other stories, I find myself annoyed at how Robin always trys to butt in on their developing relationship instead of letting them come to terms with their own feelings as I'm sure canon Robin would do. Thank you for making Robin so likable.
In the end, I'd give this story a 9.9/10 ONLY because they didn't kiss at the end But this story was really adorable and I loved every character (Except Mitsuki's sister..) LuNa FTW!
| Veganlover chapter 23 . 6/23
I really love this fan fiction omg super good I never really finish when there's a lot of fighting but this one was too good I imagine everything. I bow to you
| Pervertedchef chapter 23 . 5/25
And she said "what was his reaction?" Poor Hancock. Love the rivalry. You got my like for sure
| Mariannesinger16 chapter 23 . 3/17
Best LuNa fanfic ever :D
| Mariannesinger16 chapter 20 . 3/17
NOOOOOOO HANCOCK! THAT'S A BAD BITCH! FUCK YOOOOOOUUUUUU!
| Mariannesinger16 chapter 16 . 3/16
-ending- Had that coming bitch! P
| Mariannesinger16 chapter 12 . 3/16
Hancock does this to all animals. She's a bitch. She's my least favorite character weather I read this or not.
| Mariannesinger16 chapter 10 . 3/16
CHOPPER EATIN MEAT! CANIBAAAAAAAAAL!
| mariannesinger16 chapter 9 . 3/16
If I ever find love, I hope it'll be like this:)
| mariannesinger16 chapter 8 . 3/16
That's so aborable! Nami-swan and Luffy-Kwun! 3
| mariannesinger16 chapter 5 . 3/3
Thank u 4 making Hancock look like an idiot
| I LUV DIS FANFIC chapter 4 . 2/18
Meh gursh... LOVIN IT XP - and im only at chapter 4 rn but its gotta be my fav :D
CANNOT WAIT TO READ 19 MORE CHAPTERS! x