Reviews for Trust
SleepyWordsmith chapter 6 . 1/29
This is great! Really well written, and I could totally see this as how it actually happened. I did always wonder what exactly actually happened to land Kelsier and Mare in the Pits, so thank you for giving this to us.
xCrystalCherryx chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
This is amazing. I can just imagine Kelsier hesitating to trust Mare- wanting so hard to believe her, yet feeling that shred of suspicion and that terrible feeling of betrayal… okay, I'm sorry xD Anyways, this fanfiction is a real piece of work.
Kingsdaughter613 chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
Beautifully done. I really enjoyed this - even though it made me sniffle. Poor Mare... Poor Kell... Keep writing!
Kifu chapter 6 . 8/19/2011
Well written, I must say. It was almost like reading Brandon Sanderson's work, and certainly just as exciting.

Generally error-free, this was definitely fun to read. I don't think that you wrote any of the canon characters out of character, except for maybe a little on Marsh. But that could be because this was before everything that happened in the trilogy. You have artistic liberty, even if you must follow a slight script already written in the books.

I know that this will be my version of what happened before the Pits of Hathsin, now that I've read this.