Reviews for If We Burn
Kate of Carlay chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
That line towards the end, I don't want to be her. That was like the perfect end to that thought.

Great work with Envy

Thanks for competing

EStrunk chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Considering how well he knows her he has predicted what will happen to her pretty well. Sad.
Penelope Wendy Bing chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
That was really good! I liked your writing style and didn't really catch any typos. I didn't pick up on Finnick's line, either.

Great take on the prompt, and well executed. Awesome job!

-P.W. Bing
koalakoala chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
I liked it! You did a good job with Gale's perspective, actually. I did think it took slightly too much from the book, what with writing out Katniss' whole speech and the centered and capitalized text. I think the latter could be a lot more effective if it was just stated normally.

Anyway, I like the incorporation of Finnick's line, the kill you or kiss you thing. And the last line was great.

Nice job.
Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Very good!