|Reviews for Swallow|
| Enheduanna of Ur chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I liked this, rarely do you see these kinds of stories on here, but Lucy really is a terribly tragic character, and the first person viewpoint was a nice touch :) Great work!
| MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
wow this is amazing
im glad someone finally wrote about lucys pov when she went ovr to turpins house
this was so sad
poor lucy amazing job!
| Demolition.Lover.14 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
This has to be one my favourite interpretations of what happened to Lucy, and the way it is written in first person makes it even better :-) the character of Lucy, I find, is rather difficult to write as she isn't developed through the movie as Lucy. All we really know is the Beggar Woman.
Anyway, I'm rambling :-) I really enjoyed this and hope to see more from you soon!
Oh, and the Beadle's speech? LOVED IT!
| SingItForTheWorld chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Brilliant story, Poor Lucy :( Loved it vair muchh!