|Reviews for Picking up the Pieces|
| N.Mirz chapter 22 . 10/1/2013
Really cool plot! I think you did a fantastic job with Sarah. Made her a real person. A lot of OCs feel fake and awkward in fanfiction. But Sarah felt like a believable enough person with her own flaws and problems. Her relationship with house was highly interesting if nothing else. So good job.
I think house was a little bit out of character. Or maybe I feel that cuz I didn't expect him to act the way he did throughout. Compared to the canon house he actually was a lot more mature and fucked up a lot less (aside from the major ones near the end) . But he was still house. A joy to read. So it couldn't have been that far fetched.
But here is what I was not happy about...
You completely left out Wilson! Wilson was the one constant throughout his life. The one who was involved in everything. Who eventually found out everything house was about. There should have been quite a few scenes with him. Sarah should have had at least one encounter with him. He should have been his usual meddlesome opinionated person and thrown his views about their less than normal relationship at House. That was missing.
Otherwise great story! Thanks for a great read!
| BabalooBlue chapter 22 . 11/13/2012
Oh my God, you made me cry. I've read this story through in one go, just had to. It was a dark, twisted, perfect adventure! The best fan fic I've read, hands down. Thank you!
| BabalooBlue chapter 15 . 11/13/2012
Oh, I'm loving this more and more. Exceptionally dark and dark ist perfect. I'm so glad someone is picking up on House's dark side. This is a fantastic story! (I'm reading chapter 14 now.)
Oh, and one more thing: The 'now what' you're inserting into the story occasionally makes me smile with glee. :)
| BabalooBlue chapter 4 . 11/13/2012
Holy moly, this is good! House and a psychiatric nurse? What an interesting combination. I'm only as far as chapter 4, so I don't know how this progresses but I really, really like it.
| Misplaced Levity chapter 22 . 10/6/2012
Oh man, I loved your story! It was perfect. It actually made me cry, and it made me laugh a lot. I think you did a great job with House- better than I ever could, and I loved Sarah's character as well. Thanks so much for writing & sharing such an entertaining story!
| CacauHousemaniaca chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
| CacauHousemaniaca chapter 9 . 9/8/2012
Oh my god!
| CacauHousemaniaca chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
| CacauHousemaniaca chapter 4 . 9/8/2012
I love with fic
| CacauHousemaniaca chapter 3 . 9/8/2012
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| clow-san chapter 22 . 7/22/2012
How dare you! How dare you make me cy and make read 22 chapters of an antsy rollercoaster of a ride story like this? My God why could this have happened in the show? Why?
This is so freaking amazing. Sarah is just perfectly imperfect. It's wonderful how she fit into House's character. I love them.
| yuiop chapter 15 . 5/22/2012
| yuiop chapter 14 . 5/22/2012