|Reviews for The Hay Wain: Early Chapters Only|
| Vash The Humanoid Sunshower chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
Love Sherlock with the flu. Also adore how you wrote both Donovan and Anderson here. And now I have two mysteries to be curious about. I'm glad you posted these first two chapters. Now to check out the rest of the story!
| Vash The Humanoid Sunshower chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Really, really good! I'm really loving how you're writing the family relationships here and worried about what's going to happen next. Lovely writing throughout as well!
| Aqua Mage chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
Nice start. Looking forward to more!