Reviews for Nidaime's Descendant
Leonard chapter 1 . 9/16
It Has promised you need make it little bit longer
giboh92 chapter 2 . 7/17
Update soon...
Dia Konran Uzumaki chapter 2 . 6/1
Oh i want to see where this goes... dang... so good...
Inujoy The Dragoon of light chapter 2 . 5/29
Please write continue the story it is a good story.
bad girl 61 chapter 2 . 2/15
I like it. I hope you continue with this story.
MattKennedy chapter 2 . 2/9
I very much like your idea that the Nidaime would have taken some kind of precaution to ensure that his forbidden jutsu would not be used against him. :)
Sevvus chapter 2 . 1/20
aw i think i would have liked this a lot if it kept going
1sunfun chapter 2 . 1/4
VentMonster chapter 2 . 1/3
Yeah, you need to come back to this story lol.
Chrisfragger chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
Ahhh and it's over just before it gets good... Too bad so sad I guess.
Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Well I wouldn't usually review a dead fic, but this was pretty good. You should offer it up to someone instead of allowing it to rot.
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
A few points

1. Nidaime made the Hiraishin Jutsu - Yondaime expanded on it and perfected it.

2. Danzo is Tobirama's student - They'd have a much closer relationship and also Danzo's warlike mentality came FROM Tobirama - You could make it so Danzo tells Tobirama how he tried to continue running Konoha with his mindset - and have Tobirama correct Danzo saying how his actions weren't following his teachings.

3. Why abandon the story? hundreds of reviews and followers, why does no one complete Nidaime fanfics?
4701rose chapter 2 . 9/7/2014
I was gonna be all mad at you, and not review because of the date of your last update, but this late bit gave me such warm tinglies I decided to review. THAT DOES NOT MEAN MY ANGER HAS VANISHED - think of it like putting a lid and towel over a pot of boiling water; you can bearing see the signs, but you know it's bumbling underneath, and potentially dangerous. And I bow to our Lord, who has destroyed the Orange Monstrosity. Yes, it deserved caps. Screw me.
Arcane chapter 2 . 7/7/2014
Come oooon! Updaaaate! Please? (Puppy dog eyes)
TESKATLIPOKA chapter 2 . 6/17/2014
A nice story with great potential but unfortunately dead for a number of years.
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