|Reviews for Nidaime's Descendant|
| Leonard chapter 1 . 9/16
It Has promised you need make it little bit longer
| giboh92 chapter 2 . 7/17
| Dia Konran Uzumaki chapter 2 . 6/1
Oh i want to see where this goes... dang... so good...
| Inujoy The Dragoon of light chapter 2 . 5/29
Please write continue the story it is a good story.
| bad girl 61 chapter 2 . 2/15
I like it. I hope you continue with this story.
| MattKennedy chapter 2 . 2/9
I very much like your idea that the Nidaime would have taken some kind of precaution to ensure that his forbidden jutsu would not be used against him. :)
| Sevvus chapter 2 . 1/20
aw i think i would have liked this a lot if it kept going
| 1sunfun chapter 2 . 1/4
| VentMonster chapter 2 . 1/3
Yeah, you need to come back to this story lol.
| Chrisfragger chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
Ahhh and it's over just before it gets good... Too bad so sad I guess.
| Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Well I wouldn't usually review a dead fic, but this was pretty good. You should offer it up to someone instead of allowing it to rot.
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
A few points
1. Nidaime made the Hiraishin Jutsu - Yondaime expanded on it and perfected it.
2. Danzo is Tobirama's student - They'd have a much closer relationship and also Danzo's warlike mentality came FROM Tobirama - You could make it so Danzo tells Tobirama how he tried to continue running Konoha with his mindset - and have Tobirama correct Danzo saying how his actions weren't following his teachings.
3. Why abandon the story? hundreds of reviews and followers, why does no one complete Nidaime fanfics?
| 4701rose chapter 2 . 9/7/2014
I was gonna be all mad at you, and not review because of the date of your last update, but this late bit gave me such warm tinglies I decided to review. THAT DOES NOT MEAN MY ANGER HAS VANISHED - think of it like putting a lid and towel over a pot of boiling water; you can bearing see the signs, but you know it's bumbling underneath, and potentially dangerous. And I bow to our Lord, who has destroyed the Orange Monstrosity. Yes, it deserved caps. Screw me.
| Arcane chapter 2 . 7/7/2014
Come oooon! Updaaaate! Please? (Puppy dog eyes)
| TESKATLIPOKA chapter 2 . 6/17/2014
A nice story with great potential but unfortunately dead for a number of years.