|Reviews for Ninja street sharks|
| lee chapter 3 . 1/14
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue! why doesn't naruto get samehada who due to his shark-kitsune hybrid nature is able to give her a human form. why don't you also add female kurama the kyuubi no kitsune, yugito nii, and female matatabi the nibi no neko? please pm me on what you think
| Naruto the Hedgehog 99 chapter 3 . 12/3/2012
I think this story has a lot of potentale.
| IgNoRaNcExIsXbLlsS-TaIlS09 chapter 3 . 8/22/2011
that was totally awesome!
| Manga154 chapter 3 . 3/22/2011
| LunarCatNinja chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
...Jawsome...? Hahahahhah! That is great. W
| Sen Ningyu no Sasori chapter 3 . 2/22/2011
You're rushing again. There was no need to put three foot-in-ass jokes in a row. It'll get old if you do that. Other than that, the only problem I can see is how short it is.
| jsprx chapter 3 . 2/22/2011
the story felt just a bit rushed. that with some grammical errors kind of killed it for me but it is an amazing idea. im gonna keep an eye on it for now but please try and improve or even find a beta reader. i grew up with street sharks so it will be interesting to see if orochimaru makes any of the mutant villans
| ForeverFallen76 chapter 3 . 2/22/2011
Well, if nothing else, I can say this, your story is highly original! It sounds somewhat familiar to a cartoon from when I was a kid. It had to do with "sharks" in a similar fashion, but for the life of me, I cannot remember what the hell its called!
Anyways, interesting story. Could use a little more plot and dialogue, but good nonetheless. Until next time. Later.
| Reishin Amara chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
...you got this idea from the street shark rubber action figures didnt you?XD
(it just occured to me i used to have those as a kid!)
| Sen Ningyu no Sasori chapter 2 . 2/21/2011
Hmm, you're getting better. But I have a few comments. First, there seems to be quite an emphasis on these people wetting and crapping themselves. Just stick to wetting themselves for now. If you use both so soon, you won't have anything to display greater fear later on in the chapter. Also, Danzo didn't have 700 shinobi at his disposal. He actually had closer to about 50. Also, a simple decapitation wouldn't be enough to make more than a Genin throw up. Hell, even a Genin rarely throws up after their first kill. Over all a decent chapter, but I would read this over myself if I was you, because there seems to be a distinct lack of punctuation and grammar. Oh, and thanks for mentioning me in the A/N that made me feel fuzzy. Ima recomend this story just as soon as the next chapter comes out.
| Narudevilfan chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
wow, I know the show this comes from but I can barely remember it, can't even remember the name, but i know i've seen the shark thing somewhere before...
| LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Well, I like the story, and some girls that could be in this is Female Itachi, Female Kyubi, and Hinata, and I have no other reason for Hinata other that I just LOVE the NaruHina pairing! OH! And Female Kisame, as that just fits doncha think? LOL W
| Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Cool story, Good luck with this looking forward to
reading the rest of the story.
| Sen Ningyu no Sasori chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Loved it, but there were a few problems that I saw. Messege me and I'll go into detail.