|Reviews for Dark Cloud : Novelized|
| JC chapter 18 . 1/24/2014
Amazing adaptation so far, hoping you would carry on some time this year
| doubledamn chapter 18 . 6/12/2013
Nice chapter, and a good back-story for Rando.
Keep up the good work.
| doubledamn chapter 17 . 4/4/2013
Good job you should keep writing.
| doubledamn chapter 15 . 4/4/2013
Lucky Cookie Zucchini!
| doubledamn chapter 13 . 4/4/2013
good job so far, are you goning to use weapon evolution in your story?
I dread the Pumpkin Panty Fortune Telling.
| doubledamn chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
Please at some point get Toan to punch the Fairy King, Simba. in the face. pleaseeeeeeeee!
| doubledamn chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
Good chapter, don't forget that the big fat guy also gives you a piece of candy or if you say no to him enough times he gives you a Turtle Shell Hammer for Goro.
| doubledamn chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
Awww, no more free stuff from the Mayor.
| doubledamn chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
Good point, why did no-one use their fists to attack?
| doubledamn chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Good duel scene,but where was the first Duel with the Master Jacket?
| doubledamn chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Damn those Mimics!
| doubledamn chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
Nice, once your finshed this you shuld a story about Toan's Father, Aga. And how he became the Black Knight which resides at the bottom of the Demon Shaft.
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Good job, I like how you kept Toan mute. Keep it up.
| Bartlett2010 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
i love it so far ur a good writer keep it up :D
| Creyslz chapter 17 . 11/5/2012
Man, this brings back memorise. I remember playing through the parts you are writing about. I think Dark Cloud was the second PS2 game I got. Keep up the good work!
Oh, btw, I really like how you incorporate Toan's silence. It's pretty clever.