|Reviews for Corpus Amoris|
| TarA chapter 12 . 4/3/2013
This is so wonderful. I hope you will finish it.
| Tara chapter 12 . 4/1/2013
Hey this is really excellent. I love a strong protective Spock, despite his inner conflict. Cant wait for an update.
| Robin Autumn chapter 12 . 3/14/2013
Love the story, love the idea, love the writing! Would also love to see more - think that will happen? XD
| sarah-msu chapter 12 . 7/11/2012
Just discovered this story tonight and I really love it! I just can't wait for these boys to finally get together! Hoping you can update soon :D
| Fireotaku18 chapter 12 . 7/1/2012
can't wait to see the next body part!
| littlegreengirl chapter 12 . 6/9/2012
I love your style of writing.
It makes reading a pure joy. Gosh I wish you wrote books so I could read them.
You portray the characters well I think, though I'm no expert.
And I adore your sense of description.
Looking forward to more of this.
| atymer chapter 12 . 4/9/2012
Me thinks the Keptin is loosing his mind. About Spock anyway.
And if this felt like the Narada, this could be really bad.
Then again, I had a grin on my face during this hovering shadow of doom. So I guess the Keptin will shove the Enterprise down some alien throat or up their alien, ahem, whatever and get back to his more serious crisis -
being creeped out by how much he is creeped out about stalking his first officer with his intense blue gaze. LOL LOL LOL
| Dark Phenoix chapter 12 . 2/6/2012
Its a wonderful surprise to find an addition to your story. I love the vignettes. I like the idea of capturing just small moments and the trail of thoughts. Your interactions are natural and easy to read. They fit.
| nat13cat chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
ooh likey likey *waggles eyebrows* perfect mix of suggestive play and mortal danger. nicely written!
| The Ga chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
OMG! You CANNOT leave us hanging like this!
Really really like this story!
| atymer chapter 11 . 11/28/2011
LOL, okay you are awesome.
Lovely story. It does point up that communication often goes awry. Cultural taboos, lack of self worth and just plain fear. The guys have a mountain of inhibitions to over come before they make that final leap. They are certainly torturing themselves.
So, this indeed will go on Story Alert because it is a satisfying emotional journey I hope to see to the end.
| nat13cat chapter 11 . 6/25/2011
i really love this story, and sorry i didn't review all the chapters, i was reading it in the car and just got back to my computer. i love this chapter especially, this is when things start to heat up! i love how you compare the mind meld to sex, because that is what it would be for vulcans, and what spock was doing would have been rape. nice job, and well written!
| Eerie Iri chapter 11 . 6/24/2011
If I were Spock I'd probably feel pretty ashamed as well. Great chapter, the next update promises to be good.
| Eerie Iri chapter 10 . 6/24/2011
He had already decided Spock was worth any amount of apologizing. He was worth patience too.
Jim could wait.
He could wait for Spock to be won, or for Spock to be ready to be won for that matter.
He could wait the fuck out of stuff when he so chose.
Because subject of his love or not, that shit was hilarious.
I so loved those parts. _
Could you please explain why Nyota would hate Jim?
| Eerie Iri chapter 9 . 6/24/2011
Regardless of whether it was ever spoken between them or not, the captain was part of him and Spock refused to go through life with any more gaps. He would remain with Jim in whatever capacity the man would have him. The captain was far too kind to deny him some sort of place in his life, self-serving creature though he was.
This was my favorite part of the chapter, it just really struck me as something Spock might think if he and Jim really did love each other.
As for cleaning out your mind, why would you want to? XD