|Reviews for Fragile|
| sandymg chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Wow. That hit quite a punch. The 'kill Sam' and then kill himself idea is one I explored myself in a fic. It came into my head upon watching Croatoan - when they are locked up in that medical room and they think Sam is infected. Sam tells Dean to go, to live his life. And Dean says 'he's tired.' In my mind he was planning on following his brother.
Anyway, very good tag.
| 123kat chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I just LOVED this story. When Sammy asked Dean one or two, I got goose bumps.
| Agent Five chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
This is amazing. I can't believe it escaped me until now! Your continuation of that episode is perfect. And I really like the Dean POV. It's so personal and poignant. Poor damaged Sam is displayed so brutally and the emotional side of this comes through in Dean's pain-filled, jumbled thoughts. It's so believable. How Sam is behaving, how Dean is caring for him. And as tragic as it may be and no matter how much the idea hurts, the whole notion of two bullets loaded and ready in the gun just fits. Beautiful, haunting story.
| Stupid Shiny Twilight Fan chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
This was heartbreaking and beautiful! I love the Winchesters and to know that Dean really would consider mercy killing and then suicide to follow his brother, it's just so tragic.
You write Deans character so well! Great story.
| sayrae3times chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
Awesome tag, and oh so heartbreaking. I love the part when Dean's talking about about how he'll follow his brother, this time anywhere. You made the distinction about how this time is different quite clear and it totally made sense to me. Great fic!
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Yeah, I bet his hell was worse than most people's, cause he was with Lucifer in the cage. It's imposible to imagine what he went through!
Good one, hun I liked it
| AngelicOneAndOnly chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
You're always writing so beautiful
And you're stories are great
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Awesome job Muffy, you knocked this out of the ball park, and so effective from Dean's POV.
Loved the analogy of The Three Little Pigs and the wall Death put up - awesome. And so fitting that Sam would run away from his memories as soon as he came round but Dean just knew how his little brother ticked.
Heartbreaking that Dean knew if he had to he would kill Sam this time so he could have his heaven, but totally believable too that Dean would follow him - hanging on to his hand like I did on his first day of school - so emotional.
This rocked, high five Muffy!
| lunasgathering39 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Excellent! For someone who doesn't like first person, you do it very well. I know it helps that you really get the characters, can get inside their heads and know what they would say, think, or do. Both of them. Tell your muse I said thank you. _
Oh, and thank you for the perfect reward. I finished my homework ahead of schedule and what is waiting in my e-mail? Yay, a story from Muffy!
| sylia91 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
I think that's what Cas and Bobby were forgetting. Bringing Sam back from Hell. Even if he was only back for an instant and... and had to leave again, I know he wouldn't go back to Hell. No, my Sammy has more than earned his reward. He saved the world, stopped the apocalypse, and Hell is not his destiny.
I totally agree. I was always puzzled about the controversy regarding getting Sam's soul back into his body. As long as it didn't start the apocalypse again ruining his sacrificing then why would it be better for his soul to suffer eternal torment in the cage while his body undid any good Sam spent his life achieving running amok up on earth?
| ROBINV chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
I know we won't get a follow up to what we saw last week, and that's going to suck. But if we did, I would want it to match what you have here, word for word, and gesture for gesture.
| Maz101 chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
| T.L. Arens chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
I needed this story! I love how you wrote it from Dean's POV and wow-Sam's actions really worried and frightened me! This is the first time I've read a story where Sam blindly takes off-through a window, no less! He almost gets injured by a car... do you think Dean should have a location chip planted at the back of Sam's head, just in case he ends up in Canada somewhere?
Your writing style has SO improved, too! I loved how you had Sam look at the gun and simply ask "one or two?" and I was allowed to figure out what he meant-and when Dean said 'two', my heart skipped a beat. Beautiful and tragic. Mercy-killing. And Dean was not going to be left alone ever again.
This is the heart and soul of Supernatural and you demonstrate that with proficient ease every time.
Thank you, Muffy.
| supernaturaldh chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Love it Muff...good job with Dean's point of view. Denise
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
It's sooooooo good to have them back together! They can get through anything if they're together.
Great to see something from you again, too!
Very nicely done. :)