Reviews for To Make Amends
romeocitychicag chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
Wow. First exposure to the series and I'm already rooting for these characters. I can seriously empathize with Alex. I think the Doctor's dream was a metaphor for how invisible he was during his days in school. Wonderful. I will definitely be reading more.
Xandra Fox chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
That was wonderfully handled. Thanks for writing!
Claguen chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Thanks you for this story, really
BigEgg chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Internal Monologue must be a very difficult thing to construct for a lost fanfic, as there were precious few moments on the show that would provide an example to draw upon for inspiration. I feel that your efforts have the ring of authenticity. At the end, I heard in my mind that little "swoosh" sound conveying the end of a flashback; that to me, is evidence enough of this story's quality.
HumpbackWhales08 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This was incredibly sweet and touching. You gave the characters such warmth and a sort of sadness. Loved it!
Delia Lavender chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
That was nice! You really caught Ben and Alex. I admit that, when I saw Ben, Alex and Danielle together in the sideways world, I almost cried. chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
I loved how you conveyed the closeness of their relationship without making it sound icky. I could imagine this being a scene on the show in the sideways world. Great job!