Reviews for Help!
Animago chapter 4 . 10/5
Apartir dos anos 90 a América era o lugar mais perigoso do mundo.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2017
SqueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! 3 3 3
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2015
Johnny, wake up son your to young to die...
Guest chapter 5 . 9/25/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 9/24/2015
Ah, y'all right son?
Guest chapter 10 . 5/7/2015
OMFG pleeeeeeeeease continue to edit this! It's beautiful :'(
Guest chapter 9 . 5/7/2015
Whilst retarded would be an ok word to use in this context, it's become recognised as a slur. Otherwise, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
starsm1l2 chapter 7 . 5/7/2015
Oh my God this so damn good you fixed your punctuation and arrrrgh! And DID YOU JUST SAY, "BEING SHOT WOULD BE A BUMMER." DID YOU? Thanks for ruining my life.
starsm1l2 chapter 5 . 5/7/2015
starsm1l2 chapter 4 . 5/7/2015
Still some punctuation errors but arrrrrrgh why can't they just cancel the tour?
starsm1l2 chapter 2 . 5/6/2015
Oh nooooooooo...
Still some punctuation and spelling errors, but arrrrrrrrrrgh MUST READ MORE.
starsm1l2 chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
It sounds great so far! You do need to punctuate the last sentences of your dialogue lines. Other than that, love it! Especially Ringo being peacekeeper.
TheProfessorAndMaryAnn chapter 10 . 4/8/2015

I hope you update soon, this is a bittersweet story that I look forward to hearing more of.
jesusisboss chapter 10 . 5/6/2014
WONDERFUL JUICY ANGST. Everyone was in character, and this was very well written. Great job!
Lonelyadelaide chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
So, I know it's been a long time, but I'm begging you to PLEASE, please me and round it all off with a last chapter. Or two. Or five. I'm not picky.
I absolutely love the story.
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