|Reviews for Losing Sight|
| xBookEaterx chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
Dun dun dunnn! Please update!
| Sahba chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
| Nebriniel Peredhil chapter 10 . 2/22/2013
this is amazing. feel as if I'm addicted. Please please update
| Infinitechange chapter 10 . 12/30/2012
Very awesome story so far!
| EchoRose480 chapter 10 . 12/20/2012
Ahh. I've reached the end of the available chapters. :( Please update as soon as possible! Very well written. If I could offer just one eensy bit of criticism, you did refer to Arthur's eyes as "cerulean orbs" quite a few times, and though it is lovely sounding, it might be better to avoid overusing it. But that's just my opinion. :) Great job!
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
please update soon! you are an amazing writer, I can''t wait to see what happens!
| CrimsonHawthorn chapter 10 . 11/18/2012
Love it very much! Thank you for writing this and I hope your muse returns to you with cupcakes and plot bunnies galore.
| Rehabilitated Sith chapter 10 . 9/24/2012
Ahhh. how come no update?!
| caldera32 chapter 10 . 9/19/2012
Ack! This is so good!
Well written and engaging- I want more!
| Solar07 chapter 9 . 9/5/2012
Please please please continue!If you're out of ideas maybe there could be a scene where the little boy Merlin saved comes to say thank you in some way, maybe even apologize and start crying so there's a cute moment of Merlin comforting the boy. Or maybe Merlin's mom could come by and help him move on and heal. Morgana could visit and there would be some angsty stuff in that confrontation most defintieley. Arthur and Gwen should visit too. And there could be a new quest and Merlin insists on going and whilst there, something cool happens and Merlin is able to use his magic as a sense, like in "the lost years of merlin" book series by t. a. barron.
I hope this is feeding your muse, cuz this is a really really great story and i wanna know what happens next!
| FloritaJ chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
Wow what a striking story. There are so many merlin gets stabbed, whipped, starved, kidnapped, etc.(and don't we love them all) But Merlin looses his sight...it had me chilled to the bone.
I do love that you have Merlin not be too serious about his disability...after all that is Merlin.
The scene with Merlin crying out for Giaus and then the revers from Arthur's pov is some of the best writing I have seen!
Thank you so much for writing! It is the fics
| StrangelyPenned chapter 10 . 7/11/2012
Well now you just havee to update, especially as I've read it so far. Brilliance, it was. Your description of enotions are so vivid and heartfelt they're almost beautiful. And that's not to mention perfect grammar and spelling, for which I thank you. And an amazing storyline, imbued with cliffhangers.
So. Awaiting the next update, however long it takes. Because I know what it is like when the muses leave you.
| Pom Rania chapter 10 . 6/23/2012
I highly approve of this story 3
If the inspiration strikes you, I would really like to read more of it.
| Griffinesque chapter 10 . 6/18/2012
So far, this has been extremely enjoyable to read! The whole story is oh so very intriguing!
Is Merlin, the few times he has looked at people, seeing peoples aura's or souls or is he seeing the heat that emanates from every living body? I can't help but wonder when Arthur will get over his ...revulsion to being called Merlin's friend? Will it happen too late?
I couldn't help but worry a bit more about Merlin after I read this line: "My dear Cenred, dying is not the only way there is to suffer."
If Merlin suffers and Gaius knows that he is suffering Gaius would be suffering because Merlin would be.
What if Gaius is kidnapped again? I wonder what happened to the boy that Merlin had saved from the fire. Will he return in a later chapter? What's going thru Uther's mind? He'd usually never help a servant and he has helped Gwen hold Merlin down when he was having a seizure and...
Well, great story so far. I hope my wondering has helped to supply you with some inspiration to vanquish a writers block. :)
Best of luck! XD
| Kimoko02 chapter 10 . 5/28/2012
What I like about this story is that it is very realistic to the world of Merlin, you got a great beginning and story plot! Keep up the good work, I myself is struggling with writer's block so I know how annoying they can be I'm looking forward to an update :D