Reviews for Pure
Rue91 chapter 1 . 2/16/2018
Can I say I just loved this one-shot!

Of course Peeta Mellark, golden boy, mythomaniac per excellence had sex before Katniss!

I just love this!
The Goddess of Eternal Spring chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
I love this
Lizardphobia chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
This is really good. Dark and twisty and it gives Peeta a lot more depth than what we know of him thorough Katniss' eyes in the books. I like your spin on it.
Tastylilgifty chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
"Gale Hawthorne, she offered, Like that's a normal thing to say right now..." SO great. Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
perfection
SilverThanatos chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
I loooooooooooove this story. As much as we can all agree that Peeta loves Katniss, I find it hard to believe he just stood around waiting for her. I think it would be interesting to see a follow up towards to see how Katniss felt at Peeta not being 'pure'. Since him being pure is an image she held through all three books.
Fan of Everlark chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
So I don't have the book in front of me, but I tried looking up the part about her being pure online. And I don't see any indication that Peeta smiled "sadly"...I really don't understand why you think that. The only part I can see is that Peeta is suppressing a smile, which doesn't mean smiling sadly. It means he's trying not to smile, because Katniss thinks he's making fun of her.

“No, they’re laughing at me, and so are you!” I say.
“No.” Peta shakes his head, but he’s still suppressing a smile.

He was laughing at her earlier. I really don't think he was sad in any way.
nairamkhu chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
You're a good writer but sorry i love peeta and katniss. I still believe that katniss is peeta's first. maybe he had kissed other girls but I see his personality as someone who views "making love" as something precious and that he will do it only with the one he loves.
im LOVING it chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I always wondered about that comment as well. Like this take
Safira Rue Mellark chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
its almost scary how well this fits into canon, yet doesn't. i loved it when he learned that gale was madge's first. like, can i have anyone? so dark. you tapped into someone who needed to fill a hole in their soul. perfectly done
Atlasina7 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Wow-this was sad and dark and beautiful all at the same time. Poor Peeta-is he looking for love, to forget, maybe even in some strange way revenge? I wish I had your word skill so that I could convey to you how wonderfully this story is written.
Make a wishxxx chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
i liked it :)
CatnipGreenieOnFire chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Nice, i love the 5 times stories. x
Ninazadzia chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Absolutely beautiful, I loved this to pieces. I especially liked the little bit where he was sad about Gale being Madge's first, that was a nice twist.
xx Nina
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I love your fanfics! They've inspired me so much that I decided to write my own book, and sorry if this sounds rude, but if it's ever published, the book by me, Audrey Kane, just know that you're my inspiration. PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING!
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