Reviews for The Hickey On The Neck
bonesgirl0596 chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
i really, really liked it! for your first fafic, it's amazing how you played with the caracthers. good wishes!
mrs.addiecullen chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
love it
TeamCarlisleandEsme8 chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Loved it
hrhdana chapter 4 . 2/21/2011
go sequel, go sequel.

(dancing and doing that arm thing, round and round)

yeah, sorry, i dunno how to describe it! but im doing it now!
bonetrek chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
Cute story. A couple little mistakes but content wise very well constructed!
SouthunLady chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
Loved the ending, too. Very good job for your first fanfic.
drjamband chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
loved it!
hrhdana chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
ideas to continue? booth wins a trip and takes bren and parks? um, to, australia? (im auzzie, can you guess?)
Guest chapter 3 . 2/20/2011
This is really good. If you want to continue this you could show the reaction of everyone else. You could have mixed reactions from different people. Angela is the only reaction you have so far. Keep up the good work.
csulb chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
great story
NCISaddict77 chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
wonderful chapter
elsatheicequeen chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
awww! please continue! maybe write about them being a couple and trying to hide it from everyone :)
Sparky She-Demon chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
Love the way this chapter went. I think that Angela can be a little too nosy for her own good. Brennan was right to not tell Angela anything else. A way the next chapter could go is maybe something happening at work, and somebody walking in on them? Well, a good person to maybe walk in on them might be Cam. That would be akward for many reasons, including the fact that Booth and Cam were once romantically involved. Another way that would be interesting is that one of the squinterns could be the one that walks in. What do you think?
Diko chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
You want to continue have them keep it a secret a bit longer and have them almost get caught in a precarious situation several times by several people all over the place. The interrogation room and Sweets finds the tape. Brennan's office and Clark sees the blinds moving in a rhythm he recognizes. Get creative don't forget the ladder under the janitor closet to the storage area where they kept the gun for the JFK recreation.
llvale chapter 3 . 2/19/2011
Awesome story!Really Great!
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